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Tialgo
September 17th, 2008, 09:59 AM
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Welcome to my own Pokémon-Comic, called "Pokémon - Fate of a Hero".

I thought, "hey, why don't let myself look totally stupid and at the same time like a hero?", and then this Comic was made^^.

Characters

Coming soon...







The Comic

Chapter 1.1 - Wake up



http://i33.tinypic.com/mtlg2b.png

Chapter 1.2 - Silly Gackle


http://i37.tinypic.com/ir3ody.jpg


Credits
None yet...

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Master_Track
September 17th, 2008, 10:31 AM
yay, nice work there ;)

Love the last one <3

Keep it up, I expect to see more of that ^^

[NovaPirate]
September 17th, 2008, 03:08 PM
No. Just no.
You see, it is generally accepted that all comics have more than one panel. Most comics have multiple panels in one image, rather than having to look at large single panels. It is much easier than having to open 12 links to see one release. Here's how most comics work.

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Each 'box' represents one panel.
Anyway, the plot is okay, it's just very hard to give crit when the comic is so hard to see. The evil wizard is semi cliche, as is the hat scene.
Very average. VEERY average.

Tialgo
September 27th, 2008, 09:50 AM
Chapter 1.2 - "Silly Gackle" is now online! Hope you'll read and enjoy it ^^