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Glitter Stain
September 19th, 2008, 02:30 PM
Sadly, this poem is no longer available. =[

Guillermo
September 19th, 2008, 03:53 PM
Woah, that is actually really good. It kind of sounds like lyrics to a song. That would be a great song:) Remember just too add fullstops at the end of the sentences, so it is readable/singable.

Glitter Stain
September 19th, 2008, 04:06 PM
Woah, that is actually really good. It kind of sounds like lyrics to a song. That would be a great song:) Remember just too add fullstops at the end of the sentences, so it is readable/singable.
Thanks. I didn't think about this possibly being a song, but I guess you're right.

Cobalt36
September 19th, 2008, 05:39 PM
Oops...i opened it...

Dude-tte, that was seriously awesome, and gave me the chills; i'd be the one to open it.

Glitter Stain
September 19th, 2008, 06:29 PM
Oops...i opened it...

Dude-tte, that was seriously awesome, and gave me the chills; i'd be the one to open it.
Well, thanks for your comment. I'm glad to know that you'd be the one to open the box. XD

Gymnotide
September 19th, 2008, 06:36 PM
Because of curiosity and a knife
Shorten this line.

So please, next time
You need to commit
When a box says DO NOT OPEN
Don't open it.

This stanza is by far the cutest thing I have ever read about boxes. Ever.

Glitter Stain
September 19th, 2008, 06:40 PM
Shorten this line.

I thought that I ought to shorten the line. I'm working on it, but I don't think it's that distracting whether I change it or not.

This stanza is by far the cutest thing I have ever read about boxes. Ever.
Thanks for your comment. And, XD, cute boxes.

Mikau1
September 22nd, 2008, 02:15 AM
this is incredible. i never would thought of something great with a box. good job

Glitter Stain
September 25th, 2008, 12:09 PM
this is incredible. i never would thought of something great with a box. good job
Thanks, I didn't think it was incredible. XD