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๒inaryקlastic
September 20th, 2008, 10:52 AM
This is my *counts on fingers* 1 2.. 3... 4th sprite Comic! i am a good spriter it's just no one seems to appreciate my work :'(

So I made another worthless attempt at a Sprite comic :D

I hope you enjoy and please post any improvements I could make ;D

Latest Comic:
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/5982/episode2rl5.png

Chapter 1: My First Days in Entonia

Episode 1: My Best Idea Yet to Come (http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/8256/episode1xm2.png)
Episode 2: The Trainer Center (http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/5982/episode2rl5.png)


Maps:
Route101, Reed Town & Route 202 (http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5025/map1qm5.png)



Credits:
Background Tiles-Alistar


Don't forget to post your comments :)

I will be needing some more charcters soon so I will post Sign-Up sheets as soon as I think suits me :D

I have also put on maps so if you ever need to know where we are just check them out ;D

[NovaPirate]
September 20th, 2008, 02:11 PM
i am a good spriter it's just no one seems to appreciate my work :'(

You still have yet to prove that. There's also a difference between 'not appreciating' and giving crit. We give crit to make you better.

Just an opinion of mine, but I like outlined speech bubbles more, it makes them look.. cleaner.

Work on your grammar and such. Capitals after periods and exclamation points. Make sure you have enough space for text. The fact that you had to move the 's' in Misdreavus means your bubble was too small.

Also, you shouldn't mix styles. Here you have Fr/Lg based tiles, MD Pokemon sprites, and DPP style trainer overworlds. It doesn't look too good.

๒inaryקlastic
September 21st, 2008, 01:43 AM
Thanks Nova Pirate ^^

When I say people didn't appreciate my work I meant they all kinda died and were'nt being posted in, not that they were giving constructive crit :D

i like crit 'cos it helps me alot ;)

Chary
September 21st, 2008, 04:27 AM
I like your comic but the frlg tiles are the only things that dont fit.... the backrounds cool though.
Using pokemon MD overworlds are sorta the only way to go for the pokemon
sprites but overall i like it!:classic:

๒inaryקlastic
September 21st, 2008, 04:29 AM
Thanks chary ^^ I'll keep that in mind ;)

ive just there started on the next comic so it should be done in about 1 hour ;D

Gary, the Magic Fairy
September 21st, 2008, 08:58 AM
I agree about the speech bubbles needing work. Outlines would make them look cleaner, and maybe work on text placement, too. Some look kinda off-center.

Although, I have to disagree about the styles. I personally don't find the style mixing to be too bad. I didn't even really notice that the tiles weren't D/P style... they look better than D/P's, actually. I hate that almost 3D, non-outlined look D/P has, so I think these work well. Although I wouldn't mix these with D/P tiles/maps, since the difference is kinda obvious, going into that ugly pokemon center from the nice, pretty outside. And I see nothing wrong with MD sprites, since... well, what else is there to use? XD

I think this was a good tileset to use with D/P & MD sprites, since, to me, nothing looks out of place, where it seems like FR/LG sprites would look odd. What style tileset is that supposed to be, anyway?

Um... I don't really like that part with the yellow & purple gradient, and the battle sprite. It seems.. unneeded. I think it would've looked better had it just been the overworlds talking. Right before that when the old man was talking alot seems like a much better place for something like that.