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Syaoran
September 23rd, 2008, 04:02 PM
I guess this is the most complicated one. It's ok if you don't understand.


- Spectacles -



Watching.
The world, the outside, all seems still.
Every person hang on to their own spectacles,
witnessing a different view.
Sounds of train's steam, forlorn birds, enhanced
offer a grand sensation of something new, slightly complex
and it's hard to understand.

Initial shafts of light fall down on roofs, trees and passersby
and when we take away our glasses, all turns vague.
Perhaps that's how it goes
for we cannot read the writing on the wall
a moment between darkness and darkness it is, and no more.
Mistaken by your spectacles
but you know you'll never take them off
for being happy is better than being able to comprehend.

Yu_&_Rei
September 23rd, 2008, 04:12 PM
did you write this yourself? if so, this is AMAZING!! Good job.

Syaoran
September 23rd, 2008, 04:16 PM
Of course I did; I would never post something that isn't mine. Thanks.

Ruphire
September 23rd, 2008, 04:33 PM
Wow thats pretty good I hope you continue to make more!

Glitter Stain
September 23rd, 2008, 06:36 PM
It's 100% true. I like its structure and everything, but the fact that every single thing you said is 100% true makes it so much better. I love the last line. That's how I feel. <3