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~Red
October 30th, 2008, 01:55 AM
I made this in MS Paint using only a laptop touchpad. It's my first time so be nice hehe.

http://i35.tinypic.com/2wno1a0.png

Anastasia.R
October 30th, 2008, 03:02 PM
Hair -- Well, the shading is a bit poor. I think the outlines are too sharp, but that's just me. You could use more highlights and shades to make the hair look alot better. The thing good about the hair is the color choice. :3

Face -- Hmm, I think chin is a bit too long. I makes the nose look like it's high up with the eyes. Like I said before, you could use a bit more of shading and highlights here and there. ;]

You're not doing too bad for a starter.

~A.R

Philman
October 30th, 2008, 07:03 PM
I, on the other hand, think the shading is pretty stylized... thus making it pretty nice. Pretty nice feat for a touchpad and paint! (Couldn't think of harder tools to use) :)

Yu_&_Rei
October 30th, 2008, 07:09 PM
wow for using paint thats excellent :D I love it, and the shading is pretty good too. I can't make anime/manga drawings on paint very easily because they end up looking hideous, Great job dude!

~Red
October 31st, 2008, 01:26 AM
Hehe, I saw a video on youtube of a guy making manga on MS Paint with a mouse. I wanted a challenge so I used my touchpad. Gosh it's hard.

GFA
October 31st, 2008, 06:48 AM
You made that in paint? Try some more hand made stuff ...