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dark charmander
November 2nd, 2008, 06:37 AM
my pokemon pictures please tell me wht u think 43559

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Anastasia.R
November 2nd, 2008, 07:36 AM
Hmm, well, the poses are from PMD artwork, but let's see what needs some work! =D

Hmm, the sizes of some body parts need help. Ex: The arms of Treecko are really skinny and oddly shaped. The eyes in Bulbasuar are in differ places (like one eye is lower then the other), but the head looks tilted and that messes up the eyes, too. ;O Did you use crayons or colored pencils? Hard to tell (sorry, but it's me, huh?) ^^;

Still, just keep workin at it. ;] It's actually, it's not a bad start! ;D

~A.R

dark charmander
November 7th, 2008, 03:28 PM
some more pics yay =)

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Balaczter
November 8th, 2008, 01:53 AM
The basic anatomy is okay, but you need to work on sizes of body parts.

You might want to draw the outline first and then colour in, maybe with pencils. Crayons tend to smudge over the page, as I can see on the Raikou (Correct me if I am wrong). I know I draw on file paper too, but if you're going to display art to everyone, plain paper is better.

Over all, these are pretty good. :D

Glitter Stain
November 8th, 2008, 06:05 AM
Try to color in the same direction throughout the piece, and don't only color half of it because it seems like too much coloring. The coloring on your Mew looks like it could use some improvement.

dark charmander
November 8th, 2008, 04:52 PM
heres some more drawings as usuall tell me wht u think and how u think i can improve them

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Charizard EX
November 8th, 2008, 09:01 PM
They're pretty good. The only thing you need to do is color in a way that no white spots are left, overall I like them.

Yrie
November 13th, 2008, 02:11 PM
Overall, I think the pictures are pretty good, there's just a few things you can improve on. Firstly, your proportions could use some work, such as in one of your drawings, the houndour's head is nearly the size of its body, which is kind of awkward O.o

In addition to that, some of the Pokemon's limbs are oddly skinny, which just looks (no offense), weird, and are placed at odd angles. Some of the bodies of the Pokemon are also too long or too short, and it would look nice with just a small amount of shading, though I can't really say anything on that, because I don't know how you intended for them to be.

Now for the compliments. The coloring is very good, and very accurate, and most of your Pokemon actually look like Pokemon, very much unlike the twisted monstrosities that I end up drawing whenever I attempt Pokemon. If you just color more thouroughly so that no white spots show through, as Charizard EX mentioned, then as far as coloring is concerned, you're good to go.

In short, your drawings without doubt show promise (I mean, I am a good drawer, I just can't draw Pokemon.) I'm pretty jealous that you can draw Pokemon, but the thing that bugs me most is some of the limbs and proportions, so just keep working at it, I can't wait to see some more of your work, by the way, they really are very nice.

-Slyther

GKS
November 13th, 2008, 04:15 PM
The Chikorita and the Turtwig are good in my opinion.

GFA
November 14th, 2008, 03:53 PM
Lined paper is an abssolut no no.

shadowmightyena
November 21st, 2008, 10:13 AM
only prob
some need fully colouring

but very good:D

~Zel!x
November 21st, 2008, 07:13 PM
Noy bad, if recomended you, paint more cute.

dark charmander
November 29th, 2008, 03:14 AM
will be adding some new pics soon. i drew some shiny pokemon as i wanted 2 try something a little different. Thanks for all your coments. will also be adding some of my drawings that i have colored in again.
DC =)

sockyskarmie
December 1st, 2008, 08:38 PM
i may have said this to someone else, but oh well.
I see that you have tried to imitate the images of other pictures, right? Well, I'm not gonna call it plagerism, but when you attempt to copy something else, all we (the observeres) can do is compare your work to the work that you have copied. So, I encourage you to expand and try to put your pokemon into different positions, and make them less recognizable. this way, we know it is YOUR art, and all that we can do is look at YOUR art.

but great start, by the way. I love the way you colored them. So crayonie:)

dark charmander
January 30th, 2009, 12:30 PM
right 2night im drawing more things and on sunday im scaning my drawings (hopefully)

~MasterMind~
January 30th, 2009, 03:41 PM
very cute i like them ^_^

dark charmander
February 7th, 2009, 05:02 AM
ok as we speak i am scaning my drawings will post them l8er

nnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooo my scaner is not workin

my scaner is working again =D

dark charmander
February 22nd, 2009, 03:09 AM
IT WONT LOAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wht other way can i put my pics in a post without going into insert image

hmongboy337
February 28th, 2009, 09:33 AM
pretty nice. reminds me of my lil bro's drawings.