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eevee_evolutions
August 28th, 2004, 04:18 AM
I know its not veery long or very good but I just wrote it and had to put it up.

Autumn winds and Winter nights,
I freeze in the cold of the darkness that is all around.
I shiver as my bones grow colder,
I cannot see much farther than my own hand can reach,
But I know it is all ok and all will be well.
I know though the darkness is thick,and the wind is cold,
That you will be here soon,
You will come and once again I shall feel warm.
For when you come so does Spring and Summer,
When you come there shall be Spring winds and summer nights.
My bones will grow warm and soft once your near again,
I will breath with ease,
Instead of feeling the burning cold in my throat,
I shall see with the eye of an eagle,
When your near to me again.
Until then I bear the cold,harsh Winter nights,
Until then I bear the hard,fast Autumn winds,
But only shall I have to bear this,
Until you come to be with me again.

Pikawolf
September 22nd, 2004, 12:58 AM
That was a very nice poem. ^^ I enjoyed it! I hope you do more poems too! I have a new poem, called "Tranquility" if you'd ever care to read it. I give you, 10/10

~Kelsey

eevee_evolutions
September 22nd, 2004, 12:59 AM
wow thanks for the compliment.First one I ever got.*tears up*It makes me feel so nice.jk bout the tearing up part and I'd l;ove to see your poem "Tranquility".