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cooluke21
November 30th, 2008, 04:28 AM
Pokémon Underworld

Hi my name is Luke you may know me but some may not. I’m the creator of the idea (only idea atm) of Journey to the center of the earth. And I have a new Idea pokémon Underworld. I will tell you what will happen then publish the whole story. In Hanto some thing abnormal is happening the ground starts to shake Digletts pop out of the ground Zubats flying angrily in the purple lit skies. A loud rumbling emerges for a split second then stops. You’re tired and decide to head home from route 32. You rest your head then suddenly awake the next day. You hear a ringing from your Poketalk Its prof Oak who has moved. He asked you to go to Mount Offspring.

After 5 posts I will update some story and tell you what happens when you get to Mount Offspring.

cooluke21
December 2nd, 2008, 12:24 PM
Comments will be apprectiated :)

Anuhrima
December 2nd, 2008, 01:14 PM
dude that is a double post.

cooluke21
December 2nd, 2008, 01:36 PM
NO it isnt a double post is posting the same thing twice

Ninja Tree
December 2nd, 2008, 01:41 PM
2 Consecutive posts is a double post. End of discussion. There is a convenient edit button for your posts in case you didn't know.

PokemonOI
December 2nd, 2008, 03:39 PM
Well thats uh...um...Five posts so um wheres that update?:paranoid:

~JV~
December 2nd, 2008, 04:12 PM
You have a really great idea here, but where is the work?

cooluke21
December 3rd, 2008, 08:05 AM
1st okay sorry ill edit it now
2nd what work this is in story plot
3rd ........... the update!

Okay these are some features:
All characters from the anime are going to be in the game some where
I was playing GTA and i thought about putting hidden things such as cards which will help power up moves and such

Any more you think should be just send me a message!

And now why you have to go to Mount offspring and yes you probly got it a legendary pokemon gives bith and this is why the destruption is happening and the best bit you get to decide what legendaire :)

Exiled~Shadow
December 3rd, 2008, 12:05 PM
dude this is a cool idea but dont keep changing ideas... just find one you like and stick with it... otherwise you will never make a game........

Sweet Smoochum
December 5th, 2008, 07:57 PM
I like the idea of having the trainers from the anime in your game. :)

cooluke21
December 9th, 2008, 10:32 AM
Can someone tell me how to make an online game plz i want to make one :)

December 9th, 2008, 02:12 PM
Pokémon Underworld ...Underworld? Like the Greek one? Then call it something catchy like Tartarus...



Hi my name is Luke Skywalker? AWESOME!!! you may know me but some may not pI know you; you're Luke.. I’m the creator of the idea (only idea atm) of Journey to the center of the earth ...actually, Verne beat you to it.. And I have a new Idea pokémon Underworld. I will tell you what will happen Then just do it already... then publish the whole story. In Hanto ...lose the name. Really, just lose it right now...there is no 'rule' that there has to be an 'O' suffix in a region name. Yes, many Japanese regions do, but it's no unspoken rule... some thing abnormal is happening the ground starts to shake Earthquake attacks are not abnormal. Digletts pop out of the ground That's normal. Zubats flying angrily in the purple lit skies They do that, too.. A loud rumbling emerges From where? for a split second then stops. You’re tired and decide to head home from route 32 So now we're in Johto? Dude, you're really confusing me...I thought we were in Hanto.. You Oh, so now I'm in this? Am I 10? Yeah, probably... rest your head then suddenly awake the next day. You hear a ringing from your Poketalk Its prof Oak who has moved That's definitely a bad plot move. Let Mewtwo wings while you're at it.... He asked you to go to Mount Offspring Another Mt. Coronet? That's what it sounds like....

After 5 posts I will update some story and tell you what happens when you get to Mount Offspring.
...this needs serious handcrafting. And, for the record, pkmn come from eggs, dude...and Mt. Whatevertheycallit never exploded when Articunos laid eggs for the other Articunos. Does not work...

cooluke21
December 11th, 2008, 09:36 AM
Well thanks for the mock now if youre finshed i think youre just pathetic and have way to much spare time.

h POKE
December 11th, 2008, 02:34 PM
Agent Zero, that was a little harsh (as per usual)...
However, I do believe the story needs a bit more thought put into it if you want to create a story that's going to appeal to appeal to people.
Also, the above comment is not the way to go about doing things. You'll never get anywhere fighting fire, especially AZ's incredibly-critical-for-this-nine-year-old style, with more fire. Take what he says and fix it.