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Alli
December 27th, 2008, 07:59 PM
Poem removed because I was an emo kid.

h POKE
December 28th, 2008, 05:47 PM
Hmm... Is it just me, or has there been a recent theme in your poetry? Thankfully I've never known anyone to be so pushy. Is this a reflection of your experiences (hopefully you didn't actually kill a man. Right?) or of somebody else you've known? I like the wording, even if it's just a short, but not-so-sweet poem.

Alli
December 28th, 2008, 06:22 PM
Theme in my poems? Elaborate, if you please.

No, I didn't kill him. I think I might have killed his soul. Apparently, my ex boyfriend still asks about me and hasn't been the same since I broke up with him -cough- a year ago.

h POKE
December 30th, 2008, 10:08 AM
Oh, my... Clingy people get to me as well. But, it is your own experience, so I won't delve further.
In terms of the theme I see, it's death. Either literally or figuratively, there is a lot of death in your poems.

Alli
December 31st, 2008, 11:38 PM
Oh, my... Clingy people get to me as well. But, it is your own experience, so I won't delve further.
In terms of the theme I see, it's death. Either literally or figuratively, there is a lot of death in your poems.

I haven't even seen him since April of 08, so I wouldn't call him clingy. But that's just my definition.

Figurative death, I suppose. Or wanthing to die...something. I guess you're right. I do have a lot of death. Ho hum.

Ember
January 4th, 2009, 06:00 AM
nice poem :) is kinda literal thought ...

Alli
January 4th, 2009, 07:51 PM
Thank you~

Yeah, I tried for the literal thing, but not all of it is literal. I obviously didn't kill the dude. xD;

Ember
January 7th, 2009, 03:01 AM
keep up the good job :) hehe