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dragonstar
January 22nd, 2009, 06:57 AM
44803here is a new comic form Dragonstar productions. The more response and readers it gets the more chapters will be produced. Please critize it as much as you want, I am new at sprite comics

Fox♠
January 22nd, 2009, 07:52 AM
The story and characters seem good enough, you've made a brave move using a homosexual character as a protagonist, which I admire you for as most people wouldn't challenge the predujice. Your main problem is presentation. Work on your sppech bubbles and give them tails, also use size 10-12 verdanna as the font, thats the nicest for default fonts imo.

dragonstar
January 22nd, 2009, 08:50 AM
The story and characters seem good enough, you've made a brave move using a homosexual character as a protagonist, which I admire you for as most people wouldn't challenge the predujice. Your main problem is presentation. Work on your sppech bubbles and give them tails, also use size 10-12 verdanna as the font, thats the nicest for default fonts imo.


Thank You for the Review FoxHound! I'm add you add advice when I reformat the next comic tonight. Avalon is in homosexual because I based him off of a friend of mine who has been like a brother to me.

FatalizSik
February 1st, 2009, 01:15 AM
its was kinda funny. i liked it. i also agree with FoxHound!

Seadiga
February 20th, 2009, 02:36 PM
Pretty Cool.Excellent.Outstanding.*Thinks of more Words*Best ones I've ever seen.It's Funny so I agree with FatalizSik