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kidpunk
February 1st, 2009, 06:57 PM
(Whisper)Why
Why
Why
Why

Bring the pain to me?
Show me nothing but sympathy
beating away the seems

Show me that I care
Take me to my wonderland
and tell me that I can live

WHY!
Is it so hard?

TRY!
Not to break me
Not to break me!

Break
Shatter
Fallen in your spiraling command

Break
Tear away at me
try to forgive me

Your!
A Monster

Your!
not my bride

I'm!
not the besy guy

But your!
not the son

WHAT!

(x2) Break
Shatter
Fallen in your spiraling command

Break
Tear away at me
try to forgive me
try to forgive me

Unforgettable
February 3rd, 2009, 10:03 AM
It's pretty good, but I don't know if I can picture it as a song... it seems it would either be really really short, or mainly music. And the repetition would get on my nerves :x
But other than that, it's pretty good :3