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February 5th, 2009, 9:40 PM
Okay, this is similar to Forsaken One, but this one came first and I just wrote what I felt like writing.

Dearest one

There is not a moment when you are not in my mind,
Never a day passes when I do not think of your beauty,
Never will I not dream of your deep, beautiful blue eyes that excite the hearts of men and are as deep and clear as a lake with the light of the full moon,

Will I never know the feel of your gentle embrace?
Will I never see how your perfect mouth moves and curves as you say every word, sing every song, whisper every secret?
Am I cursed to never know the feel of your lips with every one of your kisses?

My love for you is a fire, burning brightly and strong amidst the chaos and confusion of the world,
A fire that was started by you,
And a fire that will never die even if a thousand years pass, a thousand seas douse it, a thousand tornadoes tear it asunder;

A gentle, undying love is all I can offer you,

I dream of the moment you declare feelings for me,
Feelings that will never falter or be second thought;
Never will they be second to another,

How I long to be by your side,

But remember this in your heart, I will always love you, no matter what happens you can count on my unconditional love,

your love

February 8th, 2009, 5:18 AM
Wow. That's deep. Really good.

February 8th, 2009, 10:05 AM
Glad you liked it.
Out of interest, what part did you like best?