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Reminiscing
February 28th, 2009, 08:50 PM
Love is a word that I don't believe
Coz I think even without it I'll find relief
But this all changed since the day you came
You gave me love I'll never feel again.

You made it possible for me to believe in love
You did give me love as pure as a white dove
My life has never been the same
All have changed since the day you came.

You gave me hope and courage to face my days
So for these I wont ever give you rainy days.
I never felt this happiness all my life
So I thank you for entering my life

And now that I've already found you
I'll never want to lose and hurt you
I want to thank you for giving me love
And I want you to know you're everything I have.


So do you liked it?

Vincent.
February 28th, 2009, 08:57 PM
well pretty good poetry=]

~MasterMind~
February 28th, 2009, 09:00 PM
I think its quite good~
keep it up ^^

Heart
February 28th, 2009, 09:04 PM
well all I can say is it's quite good.
I like it though so keep it up.

Pledge
February 28th, 2009, 09:12 PM
I like it
good job.

~*Ecto*

Ranken
February 28th, 2009, 09:14 PM
hmm...it's quite good and touching:3
keepup the good work!!!

Megaera
February 28th, 2009, 09:36 PM
it pretty good good job^_^

Revelation
March 5th, 2009, 03:54 AM
I liked it good work on that^^

Sexycheese
March 5th, 2009, 04:13 AM
Im not a huge fan of poetry but it seemed to be quite good :)

Jinglepot
March 15th, 2009, 04:45 PM
OMG! THat would make a great song! I Love it!

Reminiscing
March 16th, 2009, 12:07 AM
OMG! THat would make a great song! I Love it!
Really huh..thanks!=]
but I prefer this as poem..thanks guys.

Libertyyy
March 18th, 2009, 03:13 AM
wow! it's brilliant! i like it! ^-^

Tear
March 21st, 2009, 08:34 PM
Wow, this is so good, I love it so much...Good work!

Vie
March 22nd, 2009, 07:20 AM
I really liked it, but you could try to find more different rhyme patterns...I am not a friend of aabb.
there is nothing better than a love poem :3

Reminiscing
March 23rd, 2009, 06:23 PM
I really liked it, but you could try to find more different rhyme patterns...I am not a friend of aabb.
there is nothing better than a love poem :3
I'll try....but thanks a lot.

Heather
March 23rd, 2009, 07:23 PM
Wow that was really good. I almost shead a tear reading your poem. Keep up the great work! ;)

Reminiscing
March 24th, 2009, 03:27 AM
Wow that was really good. I almost shead a tear reading your poem. Keep up the great work! ;)

Really? wow,..thanks guys =]

Brownies
March 26th, 2009, 05:49 PM
That's really a great poem FranCine!, it's really good!