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Reminiscing
March 1st, 2009, 04:50 AM
Love is a word that I don't believe
Coz I think even without it I'll find relief
But this all changed since the day you came
You gave me love I'll never feel again.

You made it possible for me to believe in love
You did give me love as pure as a white dove
My life has never been the same
All have changed since the day you came.

You gave me hope and courage to face my days
So for these I wont ever give you rainy days.
I never felt this happiness all my life
So I thank you for entering my life

And now that I've already found you
I'll never want to lose and hurt you
I want to thank you for giving me love
And I want you to know you're everything I have.


So do you liked it?
Vincent.
March 1st, 2009, 04:57 AM
well pretty good poetry=]
~MasterMind~
March 1st, 2009, 05:00 AM
I think its quite good~
keep it up ^^
Heart
March 1st, 2009, 05:04 AM
well all I can say is it's quite good.
I like it though so keep it up.
Pledge
March 1st, 2009, 05:12 AM
I like it
good job.

~*Ecto*
Ranken
March 1st, 2009, 05:14 AM
hmm...it's quite good and touching:3
keepup the good work!!!
Megaera
March 1st, 2009, 05:36 AM
it pretty good good job^_^
Revelation
March 5th, 2009, 11:54 AM
I liked it good work on that^^
Sexycheese
March 5th, 2009, 12:13 PM
Im not a huge fan of poetry but it seemed to be quite good :)
Jinglepot
March 16th, 2009, 12:45 AM
OMG! THat would make a great song! I Love it!
Reminiscing
March 16th, 2009, 08:07 AM
OMG! THat would make a great song! I Love it!
Really huh..thanks!=]
but I prefer this as poem..thanks guys.
Libertyyy
March 18th, 2009, 11:13 AM
wow! it's brilliant! i like it! ^-^
Tear
March 22nd, 2009, 04:34 AM
Wow, this is so good, I love it so much...Good work!
Vie
March 22nd, 2009, 03:20 PM
I really liked it, but you could try to find more different rhyme patterns...I am not a friend of aabb.
there is nothing better than a love poem :3
Reminiscing
March 24th, 2009, 02:23 AM
I really liked it, but you could try to find more different rhyme patterns...I am not a friend of aabb.
there is nothing better than a love poem :3
I'll try....but thanks a lot.
Heather.
March 24th, 2009, 03:23 AM
Wow that was really good. I almost shead a tear reading your poem. Keep up the great work! ;)
Reminiscing
March 24th, 2009, 11:27 AM
Wow that was really good. I almost shead a tear reading your poem. Keep up the great work! ;)

Really? wow,..thanks guys =]
Brownies
March 27th, 2009, 01:49 AM
That's really a great poem FranCine!, it's really good!