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Reminiscing
March 1st, 2009, 03:53 PM
I fared the placid sea of moonlit night
They dared to rush back to the fearless height
To soar the highest mark I thrust my strength
They pulled me back to where I'm restricted
Tomorrow might just see me one dead soul
And they'll cast their eyes on me that cold
Gone are the words that cuddled me for life
Since birth they missed to hit the mark
and when the sun rose from its grave
They tossed me all that they were
And the yoke I bore were theirs before
Should lose or win press to play more
The moonlit night runs through my veins
Day and night I wait the sea of dream.


~FranCine!

Ranken
March 1st, 2009, 03:58 PM
wow pretty good:3 you're doing a good job^^
keep it up

Pledge
March 1st, 2009, 04:00 PM
that's quite good^^
I like it good work=]

~ecto

Vincent.
March 1st, 2009, 04:35 PM
wow that's 2, anyways good work I love it keep up the good job:)

Megaera
March 1st, 2009, 07:42 PM
I liked it good work you got thereC:

Revelation
March 6th, 2009, 04:24 PM
good work on that I liked it ^^

Heart
March 18th, 2009, 01:23 AM
I think I learned something about here...

Tear
March 21st, 2009, 08:30 PM
I liked it, it's good....nice work you got there.

Brownies
March 26th, 2009, 05:38 PM
Good poem, great work ya got there!