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Ranken
March 2nd, 2009, 12:19 AM
What was the start of all this?
When did the cogs of fate begin to turn?
Perhaps it is impossible to group
that answer no,
From the deep within the flow of time
We loved so many,
But hated much.
we hurt others and we hurt ourselves.
Yet even then we ran like
the wind,
Whilst our laughter echoed
Under cerulean skies.
=]
Reminiscing
March 2nd, 2009, 12:21 AM
pretty good keep up the good work Ranken=]
Pledge
March 2nd, 2009, 12:33 AM
well pretty good poetry of yours=]
~ecto
Vincent.
March 2nd, 2009, 12:34 AM
I liked it good work you got there=]
Micro
March 2nd, 2009, 03:43 AM
Wow Ranken. I never knew you were in to poetry. That poem is pretty good :> I like it. Keep up the good work! :>
Megaera
March 2nd, 2009, 03:43 AM
hmm..pretty good keep it up gogogo!!
Ranken
March 2nd, 2009, 11:50 PM
thanks guys I'll be sure to work more of my poetry=]
Revelation
March 7th, 2009, 12:23 AM
it good I liked it! good job!
BHwolfgang
March 15th, 2009, 05:04 PM
I like it. Is this your first?
I just want to ask, but what kind of poem is this?
It's too short to be a sonnet, so is this a free verse?
Tear
March 22nd, 2009, 05:02 AM
Wow I didn't know you're a poetry writer Ranken, it's pretty good..I think this is a free verse lol
Brownies
March 27th, 2009, 01:47 AM
Great poem Ranken! awesome work you got there!
ShadowLeader
April 3rd, 2009, 10:40 AM
I like it. Is this your first?
I just want to ask, but what kind of poem is this?
It's too short to be a sonnet, so is this a free verse?
poems dont have to be classified....but if thats the case it free verse....
but well written....i would say get up the good work but everyone else already said that so....i look forward to reading more of ur poetry..