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deliriouspurple
March 1st, 2009, 07:31 PM
It doesn't matter how fast your wish come true;
The only thing that matters is that it was wished by you.
Love is something that can make you come back in just one sway.
Anger makes you lonely and gray;
Happiness makes you happy with sunshine rays.
Somethings are wrong and few are right
But true love is something you can't fight.
All these feelings may fade away,
But all will come back another day.

~FranCine~

Ranken
March 1st, 2009, 07:35 PM
I liked it again pretty good job C:

Megaera
March 1st, 2009, 07:41 PM
wow! you made another one C: pretty good work!

Vincent.
March 2nd, 2009, 09:34 PM
good work you got there:3

Revelation
March 2nd, 2009, 11:38 PM
pretty good poetry good work.

Pledge
March 7th, 2009, 04:56 AM
well that's feelings^^
good work I liked it

~ecto

Tear
March 21st, 2009, 08:16 PM
How cute it rhymes too, I like it good work on that.

Brownies
March 26th, 2009, 05:30 PM
Cool I like your work there..I wish I can do that too.

ShadowLeader
April 3rd, 2009, 02:44 AM
y does everyone keep saying good work?....its like a house of mirrors or something?....anyway great poem....honestly....not to hurt ur feelings....bu the ryhme just doesnt sit right with me.....but all in all really good!