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Revelation
March 27th, 2009, 04:21 AM
Well here's another poem of mine, I hope you like it guys, I just made it today=]

Little Sacrifices

Being a working student is quite hard for me
Cause I have to work and at the same time to study
And if I want to stay long in our dormitory
Then I should be good and be faithful to my duty.

But you can't blame me if sometimes I want to give up
I'm getting tired already and just want it to stop
But each time I think of my beloved family
I'm inspired to stand and fight the play.

Yes! Sometimes I find it very tiring
To be on top of that stairs dreamed reaching
But for a long as I believe that something special awaits me there
All the pain and failures I'll surely easy bear

And it's so happy looking into reality
That even I've been in a world that's full of trickery
My "little sacrifices" will fulfill my dreams.

Brownies
March 27th, 2009, 04:27 AM
Whoaa! you just made it today? awesome! I love that work of ya Hain! It somehow describes someone I know somewhere.....hmm//

Libertyyy
March 27th, 2009, 04:37 AM
wow! another poem of yours!
neat! and you just did it today!
you're pretty good in making poems. =)
Keep up the good work. ^^

Reminiscing
March 27th, 2009, 04:57 AM
Good poem ya got there Hain! And you just made it today awesome!
Keep it up Hain!

Vincent.
March 27th, 2009, 07:13 PM
wow that's a great poem you did Hain, great work and you just made it in just a day cool.
Keep it up!^_^

Megaera
March 29th, 2009, 05:38 AM
Yes you are really good at making poems, good work Hain!
I really like it.

Pledge
April 2nd, 2009, 08:50 PM
Great poem Hain, I like your work.
Keep it up!

~ecto

Revelation
April 16th, 2009, 08:17 PM
I guess so...I've been all night doing that...but yeah..tnx..[give reps]

BHwolfgang
April 17th, 2009, 02:48 PM
You're one, great poet. I give you my gratitude. [use my Reputation Powers to grant you points]

Needle
April 17th, 2009, 09:31 PM
That's a nice poem you got there...I've been looking forward to see some of your works sooner.=]

Translator
April 23rd, 2009, 02:11 AM
That's a good poem, Hain. Keep it up.

pokerus34
April 23rd, 2009, 04:22 AM
Pokemon Poetry Expert! :)

Rating from 1 to 10 - 8!

Hahaha! Well, your poem seems to have a great meaning to all of the students in the world...

P.S. = Good Job! :)