her eyes...

[darkblastoise89]

From the Nile i rise,
hypnotized by her eyes
which wove such beautiful lies
no matter how my soul may try
it cannot allow my lips to describe
the feeling of emotional high
i felt when i looked into her eyes...

[Pikawolf]

;-; That is sooo kawaii! I have always adored your poems, Matt. Keep up da awsome work, pal! ^_~

~Kelsey

[darkblastoise89]

thank you kelsey... i updated my sig just 4 u as well

[eevee_evolutions]

Oh dang!There goes my promise not to get back into romantic lovey dovey crud.Oh well.

[darkblastoise89]

i rated urs too. so did u like it or no? probably no... right? be honest...

[Sumomo & Kotoko]

I love "lovey dovey crud".Its really good,yey.I love it!

[darkblastoise89]

hehe thanx... i personally just posted it to see reactions not because it was good or i was fishing for compliments...

-dearka, whoops i mean matt

[Finglonger]

Well I thought it was nicely written short, concise, and to the point. However, some of the rhymes seem a little forced, like you placed them there just for the sake of rhyming. Other than that good show..

oh yeah almost forgot, would anyone mind taking a look at one of my poems that I just recently wrote, "Icarian Dreams" its been giving me a lot of trouble. So if anyone wants to take a look at it, I would appreciate it.

[flame_chi]

Oh dang!There goes my promise not to get back into romantic lovey dovey crud.Oh well.


i agree with ya E_E


wow!! this is very good for a short poem 10000/100

[Koroku]

Nice and short. ^-^

Good job.