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Cerese912
August 7th, 2009, 08:26 PM
These are my new drawings I did in the past two weeks. I've improved since the last time I made a thread. These pictures are based on a story I'm about to write. I have the basic storyline in my head.

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_Sx3fy3N5uys/Snz640Ai29I/AAAAAAAAADs/MAonQyheADc/s400/scan0003.jpg


http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_Sx3fy3N5uys/Snz64qqQ1GI/AAAAAAAAADk/8MSBlfEQT1I/s400/scan0004.jpg

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_Sx3fy3N5uys/Snz6OEGm3gI/AAAAAAAAADc/-9vlDD0Y-6Q/s400/scan0005+-+Copy.jpg

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_Sx3fy3N5uys/Snz6Nwlpw0I/AAAAAAAAADU/bsrpqnuEJTc/s400/scan0005.jpg

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_Sx3fy3N5uys/Snz6NkoD3rI/AAAAAAAAADM/6x4x8lnCIws/s400/scan0006.jpg

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_Sx3fy3N5uys/Snz6Namj_lI/AAAAAAAAADE/qWG24cwNZzg/s400/scan0007.jpg

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_Sx3fy3N5uys/Snz6NF0BAgI/AAAAAAAAAC8/6n3AKPa-Yrc/s400/scan0008.jpg


http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_Sx3fy3N5uys/Snz65BxkjfI/AAAAAAAAAD0/l-w54MSbVHQ/s400/scan0002.jpg



http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_Sx3fy3N5uys/Snz65eZ7JzI/AAAAAAAAAD8/a3prVTAOzpc/s400/scan0001.jpg




This is what happens when I'm bored playing around with paint on my computer. This is a old drawing btw.


http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_Sx3fy3N5uys/Sk5cdZETrSI/AAAAAAAAAC0/onPglur428E/s400/scan0002.jpg

Jirachification
August 7th, 2009, 08:31 PM
You're quite talented. A much finer artist than myself! ;)

♥RanaRocket!☆
August 7th, 2009, 11:24 PM
Yeah, these are pretty nice. To improve, i'd reccommend working on Anatomy and proportions, there are plenty of tutorials on the net and deviantart for that kinda thing.

Also, a little thing to think about, hands are about the same size as your face, if you put yours up to your face, you'll see. :3 so yeah, make them a little larger than you do at the moment and you'll soon be even better than now! :3

ooh, if you're feeling advernturous, why not even try drawing from various angles on their faces theyre all facing forwards besides one, so maybe a new angle would be interesting for you too!

from these i can see you're talented, and you have a really wonderful creative mind, so keep it up, keep working at it and you'll definatly be a name to remember! :3!

Cerese912
August 8th, 2009, 10:28 AM
You're quite talented. A much finer artist than myself! ;)

Yeah, these are pretty nice. To improve, i'd reccommend working on Anatomy and proportions, there are plenty of tutorials on the net and deviantart for that kinda thing.

Also, a little thing to think about, hands are about the same size as your face, if you put yours up to your face, you'll see. :3 so yeah, make them a little larger than you do at the moment and you'll soon be even better than now! :3

ooh, if you're feeling advernturous, why not even try drawing from various angles on their faces theyre all facing forwards besides one, so maybe a new angle would be interesting for you too!

from these i can see you're talented, and you have a really wonderful creative mind, so keep it up, keep working at it and you'll definatly be a name to remember! :3!



Thanks you guys. *blush*
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Giratina55
August 8th, 2009, 04:14 PM
Wow your good! better then me, its hard for me to draw people. anyways, 9/10! :)

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
August 10th, 2009, 09:41 AM
I think at first you should make a lighter outline so if you mess up, you can always erase your mistakes. But the outline is way too dark, I think you should lighten it up for some of the pictures


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