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Elite Four Lucian
September 4th, 2009, 04:49 PM
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b30/MarineArmy/Testwborder.jpg
My first border attempt, I think it came out pretty well.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b30/MarineArmy/RinneganUserbar.jpg
One of my first User Bar's, anyone is welcome to use it if they'd like.


http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b30/MarineArmy/ShariganUserbar.jpg
One of my first User Bar's, anyone is welcome to use it if they'd like.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b30/MarineArmy/ByakuganUserbar.jpg
One of my first User Bar's, anyone is welcome to use it if they'd like.

Alpha King
September 4th, 2009, 08:56 PM
I don't think this is the right forum for this. If I'm wrong then I'll say this: They're okay, but it seems a little boring. I think it shuld be given some good pics in them. Good luck.

Elite Four Lucian
September 4th, 2009, 11:56 PM
My Latest Work I did for my friend.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b30/MarineArmy/ProjxtAvatar.jpg

A Sig I made for a friend.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b30/MarineArmy/ProjxtSig.jpg

The same sig just different layout.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b30/MarineArmy/ProjxtUserbar.jpg

06s23
September 5th, 2009, 01:10 AM
Not bad at all, would you ever do sprites/characers for games? if you would, PM me if you are interested , :) good luck for the future

Alpha King
September 5th, 2009, 11:53 AM
Wow, this is really good! I must say this is better than your userbars, but I like the second sig a lot! It looks really cool, and the red and black make it look perfect ;)

Dr. Octogonapus
September 5th, 2009, 02:04 PM
The themes of you signatures, or the ones that you have displayed are generally.. How to say, pathetic. The text on both the avatar plus the two tags are awful; you need different choices of font. I'd highly recommend using either a different text color or mainly just a different font in general; either way, it's hard to differentiate between the two signatures aside from the obviously stated fact that you relayed your tag, tried to hard, and over abused your blending technique.. Now for the tag itself; To be blunt.. It's awful. First off, it has at least three focal points not including the true focal point itself. The image itself, as I stated earlier is blended to hard and the background colors are horrid. For the first tag, those pixel lines are both ugly and distracting; what point do they actually serve? Now for the second focal point, that hideous Mangekyou Sharigan; it is an awful render. Did you do it yourself? However, judging by that atrocious sheen effect on the top, I'd say you're either a beginner or a novice. Be that as it may, they're decent. I've already ranted about the text, it's just plain ugly; now for that disgusting bar near the bottom of the signature.. Get rid of it. Both versions are generally "mehish" but that bar just puts them in the newbie category. Things such as that can and more than likely will ruin a tag if used incorrectly; your signature is proof of this. Now, for the render itself, the background doesn't match the flow of Sasuke's render; you need to learn the basic concept of flow. I'd point out that either the Smudge or C4D style would match this type of signature, but that kind of abstract background needs to go and fast. . .

As for the second tag, it looks slightly better without the lines, but either way that bar just ruins it. The text effects are just awful, as previously stated, plus the stroke and/or glow you added are just 'eww'. I could just be repetitive and state what I already did previously, but I just be wasting time. Either way, you could use some MAJOR improvement, but they're nice nonetheless. I'd suggest looking up some tutorials for the various types of signatures, like this, the Chidori could use and awesome C4D around it, but then again, each person has a different boat that they float, so it's really up to you as to what you do with your skills. Well, this is my opinion of your work, please don't take it seriously, it's only a few small tips and whatnot. Please continue your tag work and continue improving your tag-making skills! Please do not take my ratings to heart as stated earlier, but do take them into consideration. Thank you for allowing me to rate your work.

Avatar - 3/10

Signature #1 - 4/10

Signature #2 - 5/10

Overall Rating - 4

~ Dr. Octogonapus

Elite Four Lucian
September 5th, 2009, 03:21 PM
I appreciate your honesty, I don't take offense whatsoever. I would like to learn how to do more, I'm a begginer on PS4 and still learning, so if you'd be my teacher, that'd be nice.

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
September 6th, 2009, 12:01 PM
Well I do love the text and the 1st Sasuke picture is better than the first one


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