View Full Version : The fallen dream

September 7th, 2009, 2:31 PM
The nights so young
and yet we lye are
head in a soft secure
pillow. But some
thing about a dream that
makes me cry.
i fell asleep when it was
past nine. The dream
was so lonly but
never sweet.
the one from the past
had attacked me so
cold and cold but the
attacks are as warm as
fire style: fire ball jutsu...

September 8th, 2009, 2:04 PM
Got some grammar mistakes there ^^ Overall it's ok, the end made me lol a little