View Full Version : Rate my picture please?

September 8th, 2009, 8:22 AM
I started my art lessons at school yesterday, and we were allowed to draw anything we wanted on the first page of our profiles, so this is what I drew:


My teacher says it looks nice, but I think that some parts don't look right like the feet and the hands. What do you think?

September 8th, 2009, 9:08 AM
10 if you add colors

September 8th, 2009, 11:25 AM
Right around the collar bone, the chest should puff out a bit more because of the angle the girl is facing. Also, the feet are too small. They should be as big as her forearm. They only need to be a tad bit bigger, but that's just a minor detail, really.

Trust me, the feet and the hands look perfectly fine.

September 8th, 2009, 2:21 PM
I really like the bottom of her dress and her face, her body seems a little bit off though

September 9th, 2009, 4:20 PM
i think pretty good picture but try more and it will be better

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
September 9th, 2009, 5:28 PM
if your trying to make the dress fluffy I think you should make the sleeves rounder, but I love what you did with the feet


sanny the hedgehog
September 9th, 2009, 5:31 PM
wow that looks pretty darn good!!
yeah the hands look okay
but overall its a great pic!!
great job!

September 29th, 2009, 1:47 AM
it's really a wonderful sketch!!!!!