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derozio
September 11th, 2009, 03:27 AM
I just thought that I should display some of my drawings here. So here they are:
Criticizm that helps me improve will be appreciated. I will be away from PC for maybe a month and so I thought to create this. Warning: they are a little big!

Levia Dragon Daedalus:

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32440

Kai from the Beyblade anime: (Hurt)
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32437

Luster Dragon: Clearer(A little more than the original)
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=33205
Scizor, Blaziken and Lucario:
http://i862.photobucket.com/albums/ab183/ASC303/Toup.jpg?t=1253641276
Nrsimhadeva: An indian Mythological god.
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32439

Dialga:
http://i862.photobucket.com/albums/ab183/ASC303/toup2-1.jpg?t=1253641495
Cynthia and G-chomp! I like that G-chomp there.
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32438

Metal Greymon:
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32436

The characters from the Prince of tennis anime:
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32435

Lucario and the mystery of mew:
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28618

Garchomp evolutionary line: (drawn by looking at the in game sprites from platinum)
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28605

Megaman Zero
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28603

Gallade and Heatran: (again from the in game sprites)
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28601

Arceus and Arcanine: (My arcanine drawing got spoiled so I just cut it and pasted it with arceus >_<!)
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28600

Dialga and Palkia: (AGAIN from the in game sprites!)
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28598

Deoxys Attack forme:
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28597

I'm sorry that I don't know how to add spoilers! :( So I am sorry for any problems that you have encountered while viewing these. I am really sorry! Thanks for viewing.

EDIT: Some custom avatars created by me:

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4625&pictureid=33123http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4625&pictureid=33124http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4625&pictureid=33122http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4625&pictureid=33121http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4625&pictureid=33120http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4625&pictureid=33119

NOTE: Anyone can use them! XD

mervyn797
September 11th, 2009, 06:17 AM
really, awesome pics, keep up the good work. want to see more of oyur works!

derozio
September 11th, 2009, 06:23 AM
I'll upload more once I draw more XD!
Thanks for the comment. Its good to know that you appreciated my drawings.

♥RanaRocket!☆
September 11th, 2009, 07:07 AM
:( i'd love to comment, but i can;t see them, can you post an alturnate link or something...?

mervyn797
September 11th, 2009, 07:19 AM
the new pics, are even better! lucario and the wystery of mew, thats good!

ShinjisLover
September 11th, 2009, 05:20 PM
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32440
What I notice is the length of the tail. . It's just a bit too long, don't you think? That's really the only major issue I see.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32437
Instead of drawing in where you were going to shade the hair (and the jacket), why not just color it? And you're missing an eyebrow over the left eye. . And, honestly, it looks like you just traced over the original picture for most of it.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32439
This picture looks really good. I can't see anything major wrong with it.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32438
Let's start off with Garchomp. The neck isn't slim enough. Nor does it have the gill-like markings near the base of the shoulders. The tail also seems to be a bit too long.

Now for Cynthia. Her eyes aren't symmetrical. . The right one is too far up. And the left one shouldn't even be visible at all because of her hair. The bottom of her jacket is missing the faux fur.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32436
The horn on its nose looks too small and slender. The eye should be a bit farther down and a little more toward the nose. One more thing: The claws on its left hand are too short.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32435
There's not much I can say since I've never even seen Prince of Tennis. But the picture is okay. The second guy from the right: There's just something about the shape of his head that doesn't sit right with me. The guy next to him: His mouth is too close to his nose. The guy above him: Maybe that's the way his eyes are supposed to look, but the job you've done on them is pretty crappy overall. First, I gotta know: Why's he looking up when everyone else is looking toward us? Then I gotta wonder why his eyelashes are so close to the bottom of the eye instead of the top of the eye. The second guy from the left: The back of his head is waaaaay too big. .


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28618
Satoshi/Ash looks like he needs to lay off the donuts. Pikachu's arms need to be just a bit fatter to be anatomically correct. The bottom of Grovyle's jaw needs to be rounded off. Lucario's right paw (the one that he's shoving outward) should have a crease where the hand covers the wrist a bit. That was an über suck explanation, I know. Unfortunately, I can't find any pictures to help me. Anyway, the tip of Mew's tail needs to be rounder and not pointed on the tip like you made it.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28605
Gible: Not fat enough. Its arms are also too long. And its tail needs to be pointed.
Gabite: Its neck isn't long enough (or perhaps you just made it too fat. . One of those two) and there's a dent in the back of its head.
Garchomp: Very good picture.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28603
I don't know anything about this anime. . But the picture looks good to me either way.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28601
Heatran: Either its body is too long/not fat enough, or its legs are too long.
Gallade: Looks good to me.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28600
Arceus looks great. But. . What's with the fur coming off of its neck? Arceus doesn't have fur.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28598
Dialga: Its back right leg definitely doesn't look like the others. The claws aren't flat like the rest when they should be. The gem on its chest needs to be bigger.

Palkia: It looks like you made Palkia too fat. But that's the only issue~

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28597
This is very well done. Good job on it.




↑ My Review ↓ My Opinions

You're a great artist, but may I suggest that you try to put the characters into positions of your own more often?

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
September 12th, 2009, 06:14 PM
How come you didn't decide to color Arceus in that picture but you did with Arcanine? But I do love how you drew Arecus.As for Cynthia, her eyes aren't even


:t354:TG

derozio
September 14th, 2009, 04:01 AM
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32440
What I notice is the length of the tail. . It's just a bit too long, don't you think? That's really the only major issue I see.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32437
Instead of drawing in where you were going to shade the hair (and the jacket), why not just color it? And you're missing an eyebrow over the left eye. . And, honestly, it looks like you just traced over the original picture for most of it.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32439
This picture looks really good. I can't see anything major wrong with it.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32438
Let's start off with Garchomp. The neck isn't slim enough. Nor does it have the gill-like markings near the base of the shoulders. The tail also seems to be a bit too long.

Now for Cynthia. Her eyes aren't symmetrical. . The right one is too far up. And the left one shouldn't even be visible at all because of her hair. The bottom of her jacket is missing the faux fur.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32436
The horn on its nose looks too small and slender. The eye should be a bit farther down and a little more toward the nose. One more thing: The claws on its left hand are too short.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32435
There's not much I can say since I've never even seen Prince of Tennis. But the picture is okay. The second guy from the right: There's just something about the shape of his head that doesn't sit right with me. The guy next to him: His mouth is too close to his nose. The guy above him: Maybe that's the way his eyes are supposed to look, but the job you've done on them is pretty crappy overall. First, I gotta know: Why's he looking up when everyone else is looking toward us? Then I gotta wonder why his eyelashes are so close to the bottom of the eye instead of the top of the eye. The second guy from the left: The back of his head is waaaaay too big. .


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28618
Satoshi/Ash looks like he needs to lay off the donuts. Pikachu's arms need to be just a bit fatter to be anatomically correct. The bottom of Grovyle's jaw needs to be rounded off. Lucario's right paw (the one that he's shoving outward) should have a crease where the hand covers the wrist a bit. That was an über suck explanation, I know. Unfortunately, I can't find any pictures to help me. Anyway, the tip of Mew's tail needs to be rounder and not pointed on the tip like you made it.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28605
Gible: Not fat enough. Its arms are also too long. And its tail needs to be pointed.
Gabite: Its neck isn't long enough (or perhaps you just made it too fat. . One of those two) and there's a dent in the back of its head.
Garchomp: Very good picture.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28603
I don't know anything about this anime. . But the picture looks good to me either way.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28601
Heatran: Either its body is too long/not fat enough, or its legs are too long.
Gallade: Looks good to me.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28600
Arceus looks great. But. . What's with the fur coming off of its neck? Arceus doesn't have fur.


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28598
Dialga: Its back right leg definitely doesn't look like the others. The claws aren't flat like the rest when they should be. The gem on its chest needs to be bigger.

Palkia: It looks like you made Palkia too fat. But that's the only issue~

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=28597
This is very well done. Good job on it.




↑ My Review ↓ My Opinions

You're a great artist, but may I suggest that you try to put the characters into positions of your own more often?

I'll try to implement all what you've said. That IS called constructive critisizm! I thank you for explaining me where I went wrong. :)

:( i'd love to comment, but i can;t see them, can you post an alturnate link or something...?
Don't worry. Those who can't take a look at them here can just take a look at my album titled 'My drawings'. You can comment on my pics after you've seen them there. ;)

How come you didn't decide to color Arceus in that picture but you did with Arcanine? But I do love how you drew Arecus.As for Cynthia, her eyes aren't even


:t354:TG

Yup. I really screwed up with that cynthia and garchomp drawing. XD
Let me clarify some thing: That arcanine was actually a part of some totally different drawing. That drawing got spoiled. I liked that Arcanine and so I thought that I should paste it with some other drawing instead. XD

♥RanaRocket!☆
September 14th, 2009, 06:18 AM
*wow thans random, they showed up when i checked today :s silly laptop.....*
but this....
this is some brilliant stuff! you sure you're only 14?! You've got some serious talent!
If i were you, i'd learn some more about anatomy... other than that! this is just fab, you drew all the pokemon really well @_@
and you certainly proved you can deal with drawing other's characters! You've also shown strength of imagination and a great dynamic strain alongside effective use of perspective! you really show promise... and you lines can be nice and clean and flowy too....
yes! you have a good start here, you'll go far, just keep working at it and learn some of the nasty boring theory, then you will certainly become a great artist! keep it up! hope to see more soon :3!

conejuno
September 14th, 2009, 03:30 PM
Jeje wow the truth of which estan good enough, I liked very much the boys of the prince of the tennis, the truth went out for you well. I wait to continue seeing mas salu2.

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
September 14th, 2009, 05:44 PM
I'll try to implement all what you've said. That IS called constructive critisizm! I thank you for explaining me where I went wrong. :)


Don't worry. Those who can't take a look at them here can just take a look at my album titled 'My drawings'. You can comment on my pics after you've seen them there. ;)



Yup. I really screwed up with that cynthia and garchomp drawing. XD
Let me clarify some thing: That arcanine was actually a part of some totally different drawing. That drawing got spoiled. I liked that Arcanine and so I thought that I should paste it with some other drawing instead. XD

oh I see, but you could of made a background that went with the Arcanine if you really liked it that much


:t354:TG

derozio
September 15th, 2009, 06:19 AM
oh I see, but you could of made a background that went with the Arcanine if you really liked it that much


:t354:TG
Well, I never thought of that! XD
That was really stupid of me! BTW I will be uploading a new drawing in some time.

EDIT: Uploaded: Luster Dragon:
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32839
I took this pic from mobile. It doesn't have a good camera and so the pic's not really clear. ._.'

poopnoodle
September 15th, 2009, 06:31 AM
Wao @ the first picture. You might want to add more detail (shading, color) to everything past the first one (minus Cynthia), otherwise they look like sketches.

LEXAcide
September 15th, 2009, 01:12 PM
very, very, impressive. There is only one tip I have for you. I noticed that Gible and Garchomps teeth look very 2D. And the Levia-Dragon Dedalus is missing something...
http://i809.photobucket.com/albums/zz14/LEXAcide/user149546_pic32440_1252330872.jpg
There is no tail in the Background. Another Tip is to draw shapes before detail. the torso first, and work outward. This helps keep everything proportional. I cant tell if any of this is traced or not, but I can tell that these pictures dont have original angles. Try to create your own scenarios. It can fun!

Remember though, you are only 14 and this immensley good for your age. Keep it up and I can bet you will be drawing much better in no time.

derozio
September 16th, 2009, 02:40 AM
very, very, impressive. There is only one tip I have for you. I noticed that Gible and Garchomps teeth look very 2D. And the Levia-Dragon Dedalus is missing something...
http://i809.photobucket.com/albums/zz14/LEXAcide/user149546_pic32440_1252330872.jpg
There is no tail in the Background. Another Tip is to draw shapes before detail. the torso first, and work outward. This helps keep everything proportional. I cant tell if any of this is traced or not, but I can tell that these pictures dont have original angles. Try to create your own scenarios. It can fun!

Remember though, you are only 14 and this immensley good for your age. Keep it up and I can bet you will be drawing much better in no time.

I really appreciated your words and will surely take your suggestions into consideration. And let me clarify something. I forgot to say it in my last post: I haven't traced any of my drawings. They are NOT traced. Even Shinjislover thought that I had traced one of my drawings XD.

And you're right there LEXAcide. I really missed that part from the Leviadragon pic. XD How silly of me! I will try no to repeat these mistakes the next time. Thanks a bunch buddy!

Gold95
September 17th, 2009, 08:02 AM
THEY'RE COOLER THAN MINE BRO!

xxkaylabby
September 17th, 2009, 11:20 AM
your drawings are amazing
you have true talent.

derozio
September 17th, 2009, 11:24 AM
THEY'RE COOLER THAN MINE BRO!

your drawings are amazing
you have true talent.

Thanks a bunch ya all! I will be posting 2 drawings really soon. One of them is on FMA anime. So try to be here more often XD.

Rei Shingetsu
September 18th, 2009, 05:55 AM
Wow!
I love Cynthia and Garchomp!
Good drawings there!

Suikun
September 18th, 2009, 09:29 PM
I have to say out of all, the arceus is my favorite piece , it's sort of saying an okami style feel, but it yet is not. :P arcanine is just mushed into it hehe

derozio
September 19th, 2009, 01:54 AM
I have to say out of all, the arceus is my favorite piece , it's sort of saying an okami style feel, but it yet is not. :P arcanine is just mushed into it hehe
Its good to know that you liked Arceus. And you may also be correct about Arcanine XD. (Its actually mushed! XD).

I think that I'll be uploading the avatars that I have created.(in my first post.) Anyone will be able to use them.

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
September 19th, 2009, 07:14 AM
Well, I never thought of that! XD
That was really stupid of me! BTW I will be uploading a new drawing in some time.

EDIT: Uploaded: Luster Dragon:
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4089&pictureid=32839
I took this pic from mobile. It doesn't have a good camera and so the pic's not really clear. ._.'

Oh Darn, If only it was clearer, but you can retake the picture over again, but either way it still looks nice


:t354:TG

derozio
September 19th, 2009, 09:59 PM
Oh Darn, If only it was clearer, but you can retake the picture over again, but either way it still looks nice


:t354:TG
Okay. I'll try to make it clearer now(either by digitally modifing it or by taking it from a clearer camera XD). And thanks for that comment! :)

dara012
September 19th, 2009, 10:02 PM
Draw more digimon ones! i love the M.greymon

derozio
September 19th, 2009, 10:16 PM
Draw more digimon ones! i love the M.greymon
Okay. As ya wish. I'll be drawing Beelzemon next. It will take some time though. :P

EDIT: I have uploaded two new ones.
The're Scizor, Lucario, Blaziken and Dialga.

Vriksha
September 24th, 2009, 12:19 AM
your drawings are good. practice more!

your drawing syle is fabalous! do you like sketching more than colouring!

kai is really very cool! and your colouring of devia-dragon daedalus! is very very good

derozio
September 26th, 2009, 01:59 AM
I have made something new. Check it out:
http://i862.photobucket.com/albums/ab183/ASC303/FMA.jpg

Vriksha
September 26th, 2009, 02:11 AM
you are a real artist! you have fabolous drawings

Harumi-chan
September 26th, 2009, 02:22 AM
Oh wow loving your linework, its really good, I see you being pro if you keep at it ^^

derozio
September 26th, 2009, 02:44 AM
Oh wow loving your linework, its really good, I see you being pro if you keep at it ^^

Thanks there! I'll be uploading a new pic in ermm.....two days maybe. I promise that it will be even better than the levia dragon pic! So watch out! XD

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
September 27th, 2009, 10:38 AM
you did a great job with this drawing but in some areas the outline is lighter or darker than others


:t354:TG

Vriksha
September 27th, 2009, 10:30 PM
like always!
your drawings are superb! ^_^
but the girl standing beside zero is not perfect!
also your palkia is bending downwards!
+ cynthya's eyes should be proper! ^_^

bye! :D

derozio
September 28th, 2009, 12:07 AM
you did a great job with this drawing but in some areas the outline is lighter or darker than others


:t354:TG
Yeah. I guess you're right. The outline really seems darker at some areas. :P
(I have completed my new drawing but the problem is that neither do I have a good camera or a scanner now. :()