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.safety
September 20th, 2009, 02:02 PM
Made within the past 50 days:

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/RankaLP.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Ranka-Lee-wasted-136900631)
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http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/poikemoncouple.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Pokemon-Beach-Edition-133642932)
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http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/risetiedoutline.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Kujikawa-Rise-Tied-135963139)
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http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/yamiLP.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Yami-beach-137654583)
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http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Hitsugayasexay.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Hitsugaya-Toshiro-133478092)
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http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Lalc-drawingfinished.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Lal-C-Mellk-Mal-134680374)
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http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Nonodrawingfinished.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Nono-134680380)
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http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/fukuzawa-yumi.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Fukuzawa-Yumi-133350049)
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Comments are greatly welcomed here or on dA.

Thanks in advance! <333

ShinjisLover
September 20th, 2009, 02:16 PM
http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/RankaLP.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Ranka-Lee-wasted-136900631)
What I see wrong is the bottle behind the glass jug. Instead of making it look bigger (because of the glass), you made it look smaller and disproportionate. Her hands are also too small and should be roughly the size of her face.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/poikemoncouple.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Pokemon-Beach-Edition-133642932)
Without proper shading around the stomach, Kasumi/Misty looks pregnant. And, for the background, the ocean looks unrealistic. Usually, there's some kind of small tide rushing in. But you don't have anything except for different layers of blue. But it's understandable, considering water is incredibly difficult to draw.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/risetiedoutline.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Kujikawa-Rise-Tied-135963139)
She doesn't look as distressed as she should look. Because she is crying, her eyes should be glistening and closing. When was the last time you cried without having your eyes glisten and slant? And because she's not wearing a bra, her breasts should look less perky.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/yamiLP.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Yami-beach-137654583)
The water looks wonderful in this picture. But her hands are still too small. Like I said: Size of face.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Hitsugayasexay.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Hitsugaya-Toshiro-133478092)
*gasm* >///<

The only thing I don't like is the little indent just an inch above his pants. It makes him seem rather malnourished.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Lalc-drawingfinished.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Lal-C-Mellk-Mal-134680374)
This looks wonderful; you did an amazing job on it. But may I say something? When drawing the chin, it shouldn't come inwards like you have it on the right of the face. It should stay a straight line. Of course, that's anatomically-correct speaking. You can have it any way you want.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Nonodrawingfinished.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Nono-134680380)
The top of her head looks rather large in comparison to the cheeks. They should probably have been brought out just a tad more as not to remind me of a potato.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/fukuzawa-yumi.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Fukuzawa-Yumi-133350049)
This is beautifully done and there is absolutely nothing wrong with it. Excellent job.



↑ My Review ↓ My Opinions

You are an amazing artist and you've only gotten better from the last time I've seen you. Keep up the excellent job. (Hey, you may be able to draw a manga series. XD).

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
September 20th, 2009, 03:17 PM
I'm really loving all of these drawings that you've done, my favorite one is Captain Hitsugaya one the most, great job with the drawings


:t354:TG

.safety
September 20th, 2009, 08:49 PM
http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/RankaLP.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Ranka-Lee-wasted-136900631)
What I see wrong is the bottle behind the glass jug. Instead of making it look bigger (because of the glass), you made it look smaller and disproportionate. Her hands are also too small and should be roughly the size of her face.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/poikemoncouple.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Pokemon-Beach-Edition-133642932)
Without proper shading around the stomach, Kasumi/Misty looks pregnant. And, for the background, the ocean looks unrealistic. Usually, there's some kind of small tide rushing in. But you don't have anything except for different layers of blue. But it's understandable, considering water is incredibly difficult to draw.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/risetiedoutline.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Kujikawa-Rise-Tied-135963139)
She doesn't look as distressed as she should look. Because she is crying, her eyes should be glistening and closing. When was the last time you cried without having your eyes glisten and slant? And because she's not wearing a bra, her breasts should look less perky.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/yamiLP.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Yami-beach-137654583)
The water looks wonderful in this picture. But her hands are still too small. Like I said: Size of face.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Hitsugayasexay.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Hitsugaya-Toshiro-133478092)
*gasm* >///<

The only thing I don't like is the little indent just an inch above his pants. It makes him seem rather malnourished.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Lalc-drawingfinished.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Lal-C-Mellk-Mal-134680374)
This looks wonderful; you did an amazing job on it. But may I say something? When drawing the chin, it shouldn't come inwards like you have it on the right of the face. It should stay a straight line. Of course, that's anatomically-correct speaking. You can have it any way you want.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Nonodrawingfinished.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Nono-134680380)
The top of her head looks rather large in comparison to the cheeks. They should probably have been brought out just a tad more as not to remind me of a potato.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/fukuzawa-yumi.png (http://road-safety.deviantart.com/art/Fukuzawa-Yumi-133350049)
This is beautifully done and there is absolutely nothing wrong with it. Excellent job.



↑ My Review ↓ My Opinions

You are an amazing artist and you've only gotten better from the last time I've seen you. Keep up the excellent job. (Hey, you may be able to draw a manga series. XD).



Once again, I am in your debt. I'll try to improve from the comments you made and make stuff without so many mistakes.
Thank you <3

I'm really loving all of these drawings that you've done, my favorite one is Captain Hitsugaya one the most, great job with the drawings


:t354:TG

Thank you very much! <333

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More comments please?

Hamilton
September 21st, 2009, 05:42 PM
these are all awesomeness :) my favorite is the last one

xxkaylabby
September 24th, 2009, 12:40 PM
amazing.
im jealous x]
x]

Vriksha
September 26th, 2009, 02:46 AM
the drawing of a boy headed down is really very cool!!!