View Full Version : A fake smile

September 21st, 2009, 7:53 PM
A smile of nothing but, only
a false hope.
A smile of nothing but, only
something to wonder about.
A smile of knowledge that
made us all wonder if it was a
actual smile behind the scene.
A smile that lyes says
A smile that fakes it, is one
fake smile.

_Fake smile
by: Momo Uchiha

September 21st, 2009, 7:56 PM
Although right to the point, it's quite lacking structure. May I suggest building up on that a bit before writing poems like these? D: