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Pikachukid
September 29th, 2009, 08:00 PM
Inspired by Momo Uchiha's Who Am I? Poem.

Who am I?
I'm the fool who falls standing still
I'm the one who won't lie
A kid full of will
The adroit writer
The lover, not the fighter
Honorable and True
I am I
So who are you?

As always criticism is accepted!

Blue Beedrill
September 30th, 2009, 12:56 AM
Im not much of a poet.
But i liked the last part.

It was OK in my o pinyin

Kishijoten
September 30th, 2009, 02:40 PM
That poem was quit short but, I liked it. it was good.