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the bitter end.
October 6th, 2009, 4:46 AM
Hello, this is the bitter end. and this is my gallery. (ender) Firstly I'd like to recognize that I am an amateur, and really kinda suck at graphics. But for those who want to see them, and especially those who want to give. (constructive) criticism, here you go:

|#1|Original Render (http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/Resources/blackstar.png)
|#2|Original Stock (http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/Resources/Redemption_by_zemotion.jpg)
|#3|Original Stock (http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/Resources/Olesya_03_by_hellwoman.jpg)

|#4|Original Render (http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/a/ab/FL_Giovanni.png)|Request|

|#5|Original Stock (http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/Resources/f66d7223fcdd0766054ba0703573ef28.jpg)|

http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/Falknericon1.png http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/Falknericon2.png http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/Falknericon3.png
http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/Kasumiicon1.png http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/Kasumiicon2.png http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/Kasumiicon3.png
http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/desireicon1copy.png http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/Desireicon2.png http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/Desireicon3.png
http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/MH.png http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/MH2.png http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/MH3.png

Large pieces:

Comments and rates appreciated.

October 6th, 2009, 7:33 AM
A bit of comment and criticism, though I'll start by saying you surely have improved since you started, and compared to the months before within this year your work has improved tremendously.

I can say that for your Black Rock Shooter tag, it is just overly saturated. It looks nice, but everything takes away focus from BRS and it just seems a bit unorganized in a sense.

As for the two below it, really well done. Compared to their stock images, I can see the work you put into them and they both came out exceptionally well. These two tags is where I see you have grown in skill and it shows. The lighting and blurring effects you added into them gave the tag a very nice perspective as well.

The icons, meh, I think you could work on them a bit more. I usually try not to go for the same render being used throughout the entire set as it doesn't show much of a variety. However, we'll see what you come up with next. I can say the simple look to them is great, but you could have done more.

Finally, for you larger piece all I can say is that I am speechless. Really great effects, coloring and all. I love how it was all placed together and I'm sure it took some time to do, or not, you never know. Keep it up though, I'll see what comes next overtime and I'm sure you'll see the improvements yourself as well. ;)

Bay Alexison
October 6th, 2009, 8:36 AM
Oh gawds, first time commenting on a graphics thread. D: I'm not that great with graphics nor commenting on them, but I'll try my best.

To me, I think you would work better with larger pieces. For that last piece, I thought you did the effects and coloring really well. :)You gotta teach me how to do it. XD

For banners and icons, I'll go through them one by one real quick. XD The Black Rock Shooter one I like the font and the background, but I think you did the lightning a bit too much (then again, so do I XD). The next two I thought you did well with the effects, but you could have used a different font for one of them. That's minor, though. The icons I thought you did the colorings/saturating good, but for the Misty and Falkner ones you could have done them in different positions like you did with the Lelouch and Mika (I think that's her name?) one.

Overall they're quite good, actually. I checked out your other gallery thread and yeah, have to say great improvement there. :)

October 6th, 2009, 11:03 AM
These are really good! 8/10!

the bitter end.
October 9th, 2009, 6:56 AM
|#4|Original Render (http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/a/ab/FL_Giovanni.png)|Request|

October 9th, 2009, 10:27 AM
your coloring on the icons are beautiful
go Kasumi<3

the bitter end.
October 10th, 2009, 8:23 AM
Thank you. =]

|#5|Original Stock (http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/pp142/Raidensakura/Resources/f66d7223fcdd0766054ba0703573ef28.jpg)|

Large Piece: