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Kishijoten
October 11th, 2009, 09:52 AM
Like a chosen lonly eye that
only seeked for attention
in the blue eye.
Like a black eye that finally
caught a blue eye's life.
Just seeking for love is oh
so black and blue. It was
not a match in heaven but,
a match in life.
The blank face that lyed
when he popped my eye.
I read his mine while
he read my line.
I stood there so blankly
that the reading was all not
well lovly.

day one of popcorn reading
seeked my life. I finally had
a chance of saying "sh**"
for one good reason in my
life.
Day two again he chose me
i saw it coming and was
ready to say "oh sh**" again
in my mind.




(this poem wasn't made up it actually happened.)
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Pikachukid
October 21st, 2009, 03:22 PM
I really love this line, "not a match in heaven but,
a match in life."
sniffle *Tear, tear* It's so beautiful and romantic. It's beautifully romantic.

Kishijoten
November 1st, 2009, 06:21 AM
I really love this line, "not a match in heaven but,
a match in life."
sniffle *Tear, tear* It's so beautiful and romantic. It's beautifully romantic.


Thank you. Sometimes I do poems better when it comes to love poems...