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Kishijoten
October 29th, 2009, 09:42 AM
Written by: ~Momo Uchiha~
Poem tittle: "Allie no Allie".
October 29th 2009.
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We use to be a allie, we
used to be so good. We weren't
so competive and we didn't
care if we lost the cause.
We had each other and that's
what had count but, now
that middle school had begun
we were exported to three
different ties.

The land of red faces the
land of white. While the
land of blue lost it's will
since they didn't even fight.

I want to say that the land
of red is our biggest enemy
that lyes in the land of white.
Their saucy look can be
so paranoid. Their smart alec
mouth is so not cool.
And all I need is a fresh
new start. So when new year
booms in I shall say "This isn't
the last you will here from
me.".

Zorua
October 31st, 2009, 11:53 AM
No rhythm. No real appeal to it. It's a generic rhyme poem. And you jump from point A to point Z on a totally different topic and...on last note, wtf is "Allie no Allie"? o_O