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rockman0
November 5th, 2009, 09:42 PM
I called it Denkage. I'm not sure if that is a good name. It roughly means "Electric Shadow."

It's a dual Electric/Dark type. Denkage is the Ninja Hound Pokemon. It is one of 3 current Ninja Hound Pokemon of different types. Fire, Water, and Electric, sort of like Eevee has multiple evolutions.

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i126/viewtifuldee/denkagecolored.jpg

Esper
November 6th, 2009, 08:41 PM
My first impression is that it looks a lot like an Umbreon, being black with yellow stripes and generally dog shaped. The pose isn't so great. The body's in profile so it looks pretty flat. It'd be nice if it weren't cut off on the left and bottom. You could try cleaning it up a little on the computer, filling in the black areas that are dotted white and whiting out the empty space around the ears and tails. The color scheme is rather basic so you could probably use any program (even Paint) and get decent results.

xxkaylabby
November 7th, 2009, 07:48 AM
it's cool looking
looks like an arceus and umbreon
xD

Vriksha
November 8th, 2009, 02:39 AM
i like it
coloured good
very well done! ^_^

rockman0
November 8th, 2009, 02:40 PM
My first impression is that it looks a lot like an Umbreon, being black with yellow stripes and generally dog shaped. The pose isn't so great. The body's in profile so it looks pretty flat. It'd be nice if it weren't cut off on the left and bottom. You could try cleaning it up a little on the computer, filling in the black areas that are dotted white and whiting out the empty space around the ears and tails. The color scheme is rather basic so you could probably use any program (even Paint) and get decent results.

well, i did color it in crayon so yea. i'm gonna do a better drawing later. i just wanted some ideas of what i could do with it and if it's a good idea. thx for the followup!

it's cool looking
looks like an arceus and umbreon
xD

i like it
coloured good
very well done! ^_^

glad u guys liked it

Professor W.
November 9th, 2009, 07:39 PM
Nice work, especially for a first. I remember some of my first Fakemon. *shudders* It does look a bit like Umbreon, as others have said, but the deign itself is mainly original. The "bandanna" is a nice touch, and gives a cool felling to the Fakemon. The ears and tail are neatly shaped, and it is overall a good Fakemon design. Of course, you should color it in with colored pencils next time. :P

:9: Squirtle!

derozio
November 11th, 2009, 05:12 AM
My first impression is that it looks a lot like an Umbreon, being black with yellow stripes and generally dog shaped. The pose isn't so great. The body's in profile so it looks pretty flat. It'd be nice if it weren't cut off on the left and bottom. You could try cleaning it up a little on the computer, filling in the black areas that are dotted white and whiting out the empty space around the ears and tails. The color scheme is rather basic so you could probably use any program (even Paint) and get decent results.

Apart from what this guy said, I think that it would have looked better if there were some shades in it. If you would just have altered the pose a little, filled up the white spots, gave some neat shading effects, then I think that it would have looked superbly awesome!

But this one isn't bad anyways. Its actually very good as it was your first. So, I'm sure that you'll improve a lot over time. Best wishes~