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/Circa
December 23rd, 2009, 12:08 AM
Cirnos Servant's Fakemon Thread

These are my first attempts at making Pokemon, and I would really appreciate some constructive criticism so I can really make some good ones.

They need to be good because I'm including them in my Hack.

#1 Baleaf (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0011.jpg) GRASS
#2 Balloeaf (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0012.jpg) GRASS/FLYING
#3 Ballonleaf (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0013.jpg) GRASS/FLYING
#4 Amelf (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0014.jpg) FIRE
#5 Amefelm (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0015.jpg) FIRE/DARK
#6 Amefleam (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0016.jpg) FIRE/DARK
#7 Tado (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0023.jpg) WATER
#8 Tadopul (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0025.jpg) WATER
#9 Taderpulch (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0027.jpg) WATER
#10 Psypod (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0018.jpg) PYSCHIC
#11 Psychshell (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0019.jpg) PYSCHIC
#12 Pysleptir (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0020.jpg) PYSCHIC/FLYING
#13 Turtmoss (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0021.jpg) GRASS/WATER
#14 Poisbeetle (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0022.jpg) BUG/POISON
#15 Mofis (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0028.jpg) GROUND
#16 Mofistle (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0029.jpg) GROUND/FIGHTING
#17 Cricketel (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0030.jpg) ELECTRIC/BUG
#18 Icible (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0033.jpg) ICE
#19 Elecion (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0034.jpg) ELECTRIC/PYSCHIC
#20 Iophin (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0036.jpg) WATER
#21 Dragophin (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0037.jpg) WATER/DRAGON
#22 Trefist (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0038.jpg) GRASS
#23 Puncoak (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0039.jpg) GRASS/FIGHTING
#24 Sheetly (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0040.jpg) GHOST
#25 Ghosheet (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0041.jpg) GHOST
#26 Unnamed (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0042.jpg) GHOST
#27 Crocofire (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0045.jpg) FIRE
#150 Darkreloss (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/100_0031.jpg) DARK

UPDATE Saturday, December 26
#28 ??? (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00081.jpg) DARK
#29 ??? (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00082.jpg) DARK
#30 ??? (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00083.jpg) DARK
#31 Grunchlax (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00084.jpg) NORMAL - Evolution of Snorlax
#32 ??? (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00085.jpg) GROUND
#33 ??? (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00086.jpg) GROUND/STEEL
#34 ??? (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00087.jpg) POISON
#35 ??? (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00088.jpg) POISON
#36 ??? (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00089.jpg) POISON
#37 ??? (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00090.jpg) ELECTRIC
#38 Embikarp (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00091.jpg) FIRE
#39 Embivod (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00092.jpg) FIRE/WATER
#40 Tangamoss (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00093.jpg) GRASS - Evolution of Tangela (Night-Time lv up)
#41 ??? (http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk97/Cirnos_Servant/Fakemon/DSC00094.jpg) ICE

I'm letting the public choose some names!

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Trent_Jayir
December 23rd, 2009, 04:09 AM
hmm, if i were you i'd make them more detailed. ALOT more detailed, give them something that makes them unique.
look for a weird, obscure animal, and base it on that if you need ideas, like, the ayeaye lemur could be a cool dark-type, for example.
Spend some time looking at animal physiology too, your fakemon don't look particularly believable right now because the biology is bad.
its a good start, i hope you continue.

Altair.
December 24th, 2009, 06:27 AM
Your Fakemon Look...Well....Fake.

BR25
December 24th, 2009, 08:52 AM
They look good but could be better (i dont know how they just could)

Vriksha
December 25th, 2009, 05:59 AM
humnmn.......they all seem vry good!

but i think that u shud try some attractive poses for them.....!

keep up.....!

:-)

/Circa
December 26th, 2009, 02:26 AM
hmm, if i were you i'd make them more detailed. ALOT more detailed, give them something that makes them unique.
look for a weird, obscure animal, and base it on that if you need ideas, like, the ayeaye lemur could be a cool dark-type, for example.
Spend some time looking at animal physiology too, your fakemon don't look particularly believable right now because the biology is bad.
its a good start, i hope you continue.

It's not the biology, i'm just not that experienced haha.

Anyways, adding an update to the first post.

Vendour
December 27th, 2009, 01:11 AM
I think your drawing are adorable. They're really cute.

I have no criticism though, constructive or otherwise, lol.

Trent_Jayir
December 27th, 2009, 02:04 AM
:p, riiight. experience? okay.
what i was getting at was that you should probably look at animals anatomy to be able to make your pokemon anatomy look more convincing. it would help you alot, i feel.

your newest lot are an improvement! I'd be interested to see some dex information/stats maybe if you had them
I like the Last one, the ice typed bird one. It looks pretty cool.

OM3GA Umbr30n
December 29th, 2009, 03:39 PM
good!
They would look awsome in a game sprited.

EDIT: hundred and third post fTW!

B_B
December 30th, 2009, 08:38 AM
they look quite good :3 and i think it would be better with some more details

Pika_Pika_Chu
January 2nd, 2010, 07:00 PM
They look all good.
They are fake!
But they look kind of ugly!

KotovSyndrome_
January 2nd, 2010, 09:59 PM
I think you should base them more around actual animals, rather than them being completely made up.
Pokemon are usually based on animals.

Pika_Pika_Chu
January 3rd, 2010, 11:55 AM
Are you making the sprites properly? Here is a small help of the two first Pokémons.
http://bmail.uol.com.br/main/download?msg_id=NjY4OA&ctype=falsemon.jpg&disposition=inline&force_folder=SENT

Youji
January 6th, 2010, 12:43 PM
Mhh the base is quite good but it's more a base for the final versions :D They are all quite plain and their pose is kinda boring (all have overall the same) and the coloring/shading should be improved. Also you should think over your fire evo line (#004-#006) again.

Good Luck ;)

RedBaron474
January 7th, 2010, 10:43 AM
No offense whatsoever but, to me they look, well, kinda boring. They are all so simple, (which is somewhat a good thing ), but I'd like too see some more complicated fakemon. But anyways not bad. :)

AmayaTsuki09
January 7th, 2010, 03:52 PM
You some good ideas, but they need a little 'umph'. Maybe some poses and a little more detail to them.