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October 23rd, 2004, 04:22 PM
I don't know if this is in the right place, but, I'm working on a fanfic and Umbreon and espeon are the stars. Should I change it?
PS: this is what one person said about my fic (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=20523):
problems
-bragging always makes your reader biased, and biased as in disliking your fanfic before they even read your fanfic
-Umbreon = OU boring junkie 80% of the time
-plot can be as lame as possible, or as slow as possible, but a fanfic with such a plot can be just as good if your writing style can save yourself. Writing style can make the most unoriginal slow moving boring plot come to a new light.
PS: this is what one person said about my fic (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=20523):
problems
-bragging always makes your reader biased, and biased as in disliking your fanfic before they even read your fanfic
-Umbreon = OU boring junkie 80% of the time
-plot can be as lame as possible, or as slow as possible, but a fanfic with such a plot can be just as good if your writing style can save yourself. Writing style can make the most unoriginal slow moving boring plot come to a new light.