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xJordan360
February 10th, 2010, 12:32 PM
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Beachfront Photography #1

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Unforgettable
February 10th, 2010, 08:35 PM
These, are well done. I can see that they aren't your first pictures.
But here is what I would like to see.
Maybe try black and white, it would add so much dimension to the beach scenes.
Try different lighting. They are kinda blah with that. Which gives it a mysterious look, but can be boring when used over and over. Different times of day fix this, and there are also portable lighting lamps.

Hope that helped you out!

Dukey
February 10th, 2010, 09:05 PM
Wouldn't hurt to have some more contrast & have them a bit sharper. Nice photos though.
Maybe work on your angles too.

xJordan360
February 10th, 2010, 10:23 PM
It should be noted, that at the moment I'm a bit limited with Aperture, Isos etc. seeing as I"m stuck with a point and shoot camera until I can save up for a DSLR.

And thank you for the tips, I plan to practice a lot. :]

003
February 11th, 2010, 12:40 AM
Definately some more contrast to bring out the colors. Some closer shots too, like of that sculpture. Dont be afraid to get in close, capture fine details. Not everything has to be a panorama.

But good stuff especially the seagull, I'd play around in ps with that one :)

xxkaylabby
February 12th, 2010, 07:26 AM
those are pretty(: nice photos.

Dragma
February 13th, 2010, 02:24 PM
I love the 5th picture. It's so beautiful.