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lalo0101
April 29th, 2010, 07:39 PM
This is were i will post my tiles
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/151/0/4/Black_and_white_house_by_lalo0101.pnghttp://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/123/1/4/Mart_by_lalo0101.png

if you use my public ones give credit


*There was four when i made this i just removed my old or outdated ones

NikNaks
April 30th, 2010, 11:09 AM
Now, this strikes me as a little strange. Considering how good the mart looks, you seem to be regressing with the newest "Gen V" building. The mart's roof, for example, is well shaded, giving the illusion of depth, whereas the newer building looks horribly flat. In the same way, the mart is a very nice size, whilst the new one is too small and cramped. Also, is that supposed to be a wall surrounding it? It's very hard to tell what it is, and I would recommend removing it entirely.

It almost looks as if you've pinched the mart from someone else xD However, assuming it's yours, I'd try to make a Pokémon centre to make a pair. I think that'd work well.

lalo0101
April 30th, 2010, 11:31 AM
Now, this strikes me as a little strange. Considering how good the mart looks, you seem to be regressing with the newest "Gen V" building. The mart's roof, for example, is well shaded, giving the illusion of depth, whereas the newer building looks horribly flat. In the same way, the mart is a very nice size, whilst the new one is too small and cramped. Also, is that supposed to be a wall surrounding it? It's very hard to tell what it is, and I would recommend removing it entirely.

It almost looks as if you've pinched the mart from someone else xD However, assuming it's yours, I'd try to make a Pokémon centre to make a pair. I think that'd work well.

both those tiles are mine but the 5 gen building was rush a bit some im still working it


Well i was working on the ruff so i just made that wall so i dont have to make later when im done with the roof

NikNaks
May 2nd, 2010, 11:27 AM
My point was that the wall was unnecessary and doesn't improve the design. But never mind xD

Anyway, I look forward to your newest works :D

lalo0101
June 1st, 2010, 11:04 PM
well heres my version of the black and white house but i thinks (its a bit more custom)

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/151/9/0/Black_and_white_house_by_lalo0101.png

if you use it, give credit and please comment