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Kiryu
June 13th, 2010, 06:02 AM
I DO NOT UPDATE THIS POST WITH EVERY NEW SPRITE I POST. SO LOOK AT THE DEX FOR UPDATES pls. Hey i'll even give ya the link =P

here -> http://crowfan.deviantart.com/art/Spiriomon-Dex-176428056?q=&qo=


5th Gen Sprites:

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/ShimamaSprite.png - Shimama - Electric - (will be redone, reason: too small, leaning to the right)

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/MegurokoSprite.png - Meguroko - Ground/Dark - N/A

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/MamepatoSprite.png Mamepato - Normal/Flying - FINISHED


HeavenEarth Fakemon I sprited (yes, scratch)


http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/EmbabiSpriteBigger-1.png - Embabi - Fire

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/LizaberSprite---1.png - Lizaber - Rock/Fire

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/DinomyteSprite-.png - Dinomyte - Dragon/Fire - need to fix back shading

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/PrayrSprite-1.png - Prayr - i cant remember

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/ZerbleSprite-1.png - Zerble - Electric

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/ZamoleSprite--2.png - Zamole - Electric - No its not a quilava [Picture] (http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/_Zamole_col_.jpg)


~~~


Mamepato TEST

ignore the feet and eye im still working on them and the wing shading could use some work

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/MamepatoSprite--.png

still has the pallates on it o.0

Chibi Robo
June 13th, 2010, 11:31 AM
http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/DinomyteSprite-.png

Some pretty good sprites here most of them just need a smoother outline and that will make them look just fine.

Now Im going to focus most of my cc on this one sprite I have quoted up here. One of my favorite concepts you have here. Unfortunatley shading is very off. There seem to be a huge problem with lighting and shading. Picture this in your mind when creating pokemon sprites. There is a sun and it is placed in the top left hand corner of the screen. The sun shines the light down and the limbs/body/etc that is close to the sun has is brighter. Because it is closer to the sun. The limbs farther away from the sun are darker because less light shines through. Now I made an edit if you dont understand all this mumbo jumbo Im writing so you can at least use my edits as a reference to fix up your sprite.

http://i48.tinypic.com/25jcgoy.png

Anyways its a great start for you as a spriter, hope to see more work from you.

Kiryu
June 13th, 2010, 11:49 AM
thx~ that was next after i redo Shimama...which is after i finish this one:

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/MamepatoSprite----.png

four feet o.0 ignore the detached ones...

Heres the final version

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/MamepatoSprite.png

also made another one that looks more like the sprite in the blurry pic...i post that in a sec...

and:

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/MamepatoSprite2.png

Kiryu
June 19th, 2010, 07:40 PM
....old | New Toxineon

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/WhichIsBetter.png



old draleon: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Draleon-5.png

New Draleon: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/DraleonRepose------1.png


just for laughs: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Roroke3.png <----- http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/silentcracks.gif

Kiryu
June 22nd, 2010, 10:45 AM
D= nothing?

Frosverup- http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Frosverup-.png - ice - Shy Wolf

Frosverene - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/NewFrosverene--1.png - Ice - Proud Wolf

Slidqua - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/NewSlidqua-.png - Water poison - Water Snake

Aquapent - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/NewAquapent--.png - water poison - Water snake

Voltibat - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/NewVoltibat---1.png - Electric Flying - ??? - repose of friends sprite (they told me to)

Quetzaleon - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/NewQuetzaleoncopy.png - Dragon - Wild Dragon - Newest

Zephyr+
June 22nd, 2010, 12:40 PM
I like these! The designs are good and your outlines are smooth, but work on your shading. You've got the highlight going along the edge of the sprite, which results in it looking flat and 2-d. Try to study the shading on HGSS sprites. (I find it helps to put them next to whatever I'm working on on the canvas.)

Also, you could do with using brighter colors; your sprites at the moment are kind of dull and nondescript.

Kiryu
June 28th, 2010, 09:36 AM
i shall work on that~

which means ill have to edit the koala =/

anyway heres one... i wonder which evo line it belongs to....XD

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Froswolave----1.png

blackmoonflower
June 28th, 2010, 11:26 AM
This latest one is an interesting design, but it looks very.... flat to me. It needs more dimension to it. Some more shading and the illusion of fur should do the trick.

Kiryu
June 28th, 2010, 12:30 PM
how to make fur?

also:

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Koaka--4.png

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/angelfish----2.png

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/EX1itcopy-.png <- concept by me. the rest (inculding werewolf) are by Miss Metal from vestroia.ca

these are for a non pokemon game so yeah =/

Kiryu
July 1st, 2010, 04:36 PM
heres a little update:


Froswolave: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Froswolave----.png ice/fighting


Kiki: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/NewKiki--4.png light ||| ice ghost

Phantoki: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/NewPhantoki-.png light ||| Ice ghost

Esper
July 1st, 2010, 08:59 PM
I really like this one.
http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/angelfish----2.png
It's not easy making a fish look interesting, but this one is. The large fin has nice colors and shading. Actually, the whole sprite has a pleasing palette. The sky blue/icy blue color gives it a gentle feel and the gold stripes keep it from looking too plain. I think the outline on the highlighted side could be lightened around the face since it feels a little dark to me. The eye is also a little bit hard to make out since it's no wider than the stripe it's over and the stripe outline is a little dark and makes that whole area just a tad cluttered.

Kiryu
July 2nd, 2010, 04:12 AM
http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/angelfish.jpg

idk why i posted the pic but anyway moving on

thank you and yes ill fix the outlines idk about the eye i tried making it bigger and it just looked....weird.......

i also fixed up my /online/ friend's sprite (he told me too -_-)

original: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/thunnamedline-artthingy-.png

My Version: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Orgotae--1.png

the drills are dunsparce...the rest is scratch

Naruto Uzumaki
July 2nd, 2010, 05:33 AM
These are pretty good.

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/DinomyteSprite-.png
I love how you did that one :D

Kiryu
July 2nd, 2010, 04:29 PM
thx~

im working on that fish one...

but heres anothe-

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/XyawhonSprite---1.png

also for PKMN HeavenEarth.

~~~

Heres the fish

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/angelfish---copy.png

Arolu
July 3rd, 2010, 03:31 AM
I want all of them! >w<
Seriously, your sprites are getting better and better each time you post new ones. I love the green-koala-like one; Does it have a name?

Nosophoros
July 3rd, 2010, 12:51 PM
I love that green one with wings. They all look amazing and very original. Keep up the good work!

Kiryu
July 3rd, 2010, 05:24 PM
the koala doesnt have a name yet

and here is Felsurge:

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/FelsurgeSprite-1.png

electric/ground. also for pkmn HeavenEarth

np7261
July 3rd, 2010, 06:31 PM
the koala doesnt have a name yet

and here is Felsurge:

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/FelsurgeSprite-1.png

electric/ground. also for pkmn HeavenEarth

It's good in terms of lineart but not perfect. It isn't facing towards the player which could be a problem if used in a game. Also the shading's a bit off. The light source is different from the official pokemon games.

Kiryu
July 5th, 2010, 11:16 AM
It's good in terms of lineart but not perfect. It isn't facing towards the player which could be a problem if used in a game. Also the shading's a bit off. The light source is different from the official pokemon games.

ya im gonna make a new one =/

Kiryu
July 7th, 2010, 03:21 PM
meanwhile:

Dashock: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Dashock.png

Thundash: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Thundash.png

Thundash was made before dashock: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/HomemadePokemonElectric004Small.jpg

Dashock has no picture =/

I really like this one.
http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/angelfish----2.png
It's not easy making a fish look interesting, but this one is. The large fin has nice colors and shading. Actually, the whole sprite has a pleasing palette. The sky blue/icy blue color gives it a gentle feel and the gold stripes keep it from looking too plain. I think the outline on the highlighted side could be lightened around the face since it feels a little dark to me. The eye is also a little bit hard to make out since it's no wider than the stripe it's over and the stripe outline is a little dark and makes that whole area just a tad cluttered.

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/angelfish---copy.png recolored outlines and darkened the eye. better?

FreedomFighter011
July 7th, 2010, 11:14 PM
I really love all your concepts. I gotta say, though, a good bit of them seem kinda flat. But great job either way!

DialgaPalkiaGiratina
July 8th, 2010, 05:28 PM
:O Your Saviour Star Dragn at Sppf! (I'm Zozo1999). LOVING DA NEW SPRITES :D:D:D

Kiryu
July 9th, 2010, 07:01 AM
:O Your Saviour Star Dragn at Sppf! (I'm Zozo1999). LOVING DA NEW SPRITES :D:D:D

hiya zozo!~ ya this place loads faster than serebii...

thx~

im making remaking the Mossrio line

Aeneas
July 14th, 2010, 02:10 PM
wow are good you take my applause
also those of the fifth genracion are very well indexed

Professor W.
July 14th, 2010, 04:52 PM
You're sprites are good- defiantly. However, you should probably work on smoothening the outlines. Love the fish, too. Keep it up!

~Prof. W.

NovaStar
July 14th, 2010, 09:31 PM
Wow I love your sprites, only thing that needs work is the shading although you got it down for some of the sprites. As for the Slidqua line the line work can use a bit of cleaning up and it just seems too plain and too similar to ekans. I know it's one of your older works but just wanted to say that.

Anyways, I like to see more of your work and where your headed for the future. Cheers.

Kiryu
July 17th, 2010, 07:01 PM
thank you, all~

i havent made many sprites lately...though i animated kiki...

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/New-Kiki-ANIMATED-1.gif

scotlineV3
July 19th, 2010, 09:27 AM
OMFG!

Did U make those fakemons?

They are so great, make more like those, also, the sprites of the pokemons of 5 generations are great!

GREAT WORK!

Dorandragon
July 23rd, 2010, 11:22 AM
your fire lizards were pretty cool. I'd like to see you continue to get better ^_^

Kiryu
July 30th, 2010, 01:21 PM
im rly slacking DX

its not a fakemon...but heres a box! http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Cube.png

Kiryu
August 2nd, 2010, 06:54 AM
UPDATE FINALLY 8D


Voltibat - electric/flying - spriomon - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/NewVoltibat---2.png

no one decided on a name -.- - electric/flying - spiriomon - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Volticharge-.png


CELESTEON - Light - search 'celesteon' on deviant art yes i got permission - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/NEWCelesteon--1.png


idk how to fluff shade T.T *points at celesteons tail*

Esper
August 2nd, 2010, 05:20 PM
CELESTEON - Light - search 'celesteon' on deviant art yes i got permission - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/NEWCelesteon--1.png


idk how to fluff shade T.T *points at celesteons tail*
I think for a fluffy look you make the tail a thicker at the base, add a spikier outline or make the shading a little haphazard. Just a suggestion.
http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/8/8c/Spr_b_g3_136.png http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/a/a9/Spr_3f_133.png

I like Celesteon's design, but when I first looked at it I though the eye was a mouth because I wasn't expecting the head to be in profile. The smaller head makes it seem like a larger animal, unlike the rest of the eeveelutions which have larger heads compared to their bodies.

Kerizix
August 3rd, 2010, 01:45 PM
I really like these, looks like you work hard on them.

Kiryu
August 15th, 2010, 11:04 AM
I think for a fluffy look you make the tail a thicker at the base, add a spikier outline or make the shading a little haphazard. Just a suggestion.
http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/8/8c/Spr_b_g3_136.png http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/a/a9/Spr_3f_133.png

I like Celesteon's design, but when I first looked at it I though the eye was a mouth because I wasn't expecting the head to be in profile. The smaller head makes it seem like a larger animal, unlike the rest of the eeveelutions which have larger heads compared to their bodies.

i shall work on that, thx~


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

since im too lazy to figure out which ones i didnt post im just gonna post the Spiriomon dex then point out which ones i didnt make (not many)


http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/SpiriomonDexFULLLogo-.png

no clue why its fuzzy.... ok

I DID NOT MAKE:

Grouzard
Pacero
or the brown un-named one

=/ i made all the rest...



EDIT: o and a random trainer fusion: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/randompersonIDK-2.png

Kiryu
August 19th, 2010, 10:11 AM
o btw i dont think i posted the new slidqua:

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/NewSlidqua-----1.png

UPDATE:

unnamed: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/firebutteryflyprevo.png -> unnamed: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/firebutteryflyprevo2.png -> Flaarflo: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/EX1itcopy--1.png (will be redone)

these are for Spiriomon.

Hitsugiya
August 19th, 2010, 06:45 PM
:) thats really cool and its really shiny

Kiryu
August 20th, 2010, 02:27 PM
unnamed: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/firebutteryflyprevo-1.png -> unnamed: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/firebutteryflyprevo2.png -> Flaarflo: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/EX1itcopy--1.png (will be redone)

these are for Spiriomon.

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/firebutteryflyprevo-1.png>http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/firebutteryflyprevo2.png>http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Flaarflo.png

Kiryu
August 21st, 2010, 08:35 PM
another Update:

Shayrasoon: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Raccoon-mon.png Ice/Shadow

For Spiriomon.

Crimson Stardust
August 22nd, 2010, 06:54 AM
I can use the fakemons here you post?

Kiryu
August 22nd, 2010, 10:28 AM
The creator of Spiriomon (i sprite for them =/) forbade(sp?) me from allowing others to use the sprites intended for Spiriomon =/ sry....



Btw.... heres another one based off of a bee killer: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/BeeKillerV2-1.png

NikNaks
August 22nd, 2010, 10:45 AM
My main issue with your fakes is their size. Seriously, they're waaaay too spindly and small for Pokémon. Let's take this guy:

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/firebutteryflyprevo-1.png

Now, let's compare it to the Nintendo caterpillars:

http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/5/57/Spr_4h_010.pnghttp://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/2/23/Spr_4p_265.pnghttp://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/2/26/Spr_4h_013.png

Do you see what I'm saying? Just because a caterpillar is small and thin, doesn't mean that's what a Pokémonified version should be sprited like. The same could be said about the icy fox on this page alone, but I'll leave you to think about it.

Anyway, other than that, I think your shading and line work is impeccable, although your palettes are a bit strange in places. Maybe it'd be easier to give you help on that if your creatures were the right size :P

Kiryu
August 22nd, 2010, 02:12 PM
yeah ^^' i tend to make rly small sprites o.0

ill remake it when i get back from my trip =D

also i remade the dex for Spiriomon:

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/NewSpiromonDex-1.png

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/NewSpiromonDex-1.png

Astaravia
August 26th, 2010, 02:15 AM
Embabi and Prayr are my favourite ones, great artwork.

Kiryu
September 7th, 2010, 11:54 AM
thank you~

and heres the redone caterpillar: http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Mariva-.png

Kiryu
September 13th, 2010, 08:30 AM
Janobii - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Janobiisprite----.png

Kiryu
October 23rd, 2010, 12:09 PM
o hey havent posting in this for awhile >.>

Chimachi - fire - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/ChimachiNEW--1.png

Chimolky - fire earth - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/ChimolkyNEW.png

Elekitty - electric - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Elekitty--1.png

Kiryu
October 24th, 2010, 02:26 PM
...nothing? these are so epic and perfect that there is absolutly NOTHING WRONG WITH THEM?

o.0'''?

these ARE going into a game so some good crit would be be nice... thx =D

Conan Edogawa
October 24th, 2010, 02:32 PM
o hey havent posting in this for awhile >.>

Chimachi - fire - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/ChimachiNEW--1.png

Chimolky - fire earth - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/ChimolkyNEW.png

Elekitty - electric - http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Wildfire_Baku4/Elekitty--1.png

I'm assuming they're fakemon, am I right? The shading is off on all of them, remember the light source is in the top left. The first two need some work on the poses, none of the sprites to date are facing directly to the left. They generally face towards the bottom left, where the players pokemon is. Also, the palettes are kind of dull, I'd suggest using palettes from the original sprites. The lineart isn't to bad, though you may want to lengthen the tail on the first two and make the third sprite larger overall. Not a bad start, but they could use some work.

KittenCry66
October 25th, 2010, 08:00 AM
WOOAAH!!!

So LOVELY!

Make more, NAO!

~KittenCry66

Esper
October 25th, 2010, 08:57 AM
Chimachi and Chimolky are rather similar in their designs and poses. That's not necessarily a bad thing, but they don't have much fine detail - the feet have no toes, the faces have no mouths, and they don't have much in the way of coloring. Not having one of these things doesn't make it bad, but not having any of them makes the sprites look unfinished. They are cute designs though.

WOOAAH!!!

So LOVELY!

Make more, NAO!

~KittenCry66
Please try to add a little for detail to your comments. Saying you like someone's work is great for the ego, but constructive criticism is usually more helpful.

Kiryu
November 3rd, 2010, 12:09 PM
I'm assuming they're fakemon, am I right?

no.... they're spiriomon. somewhat different style of shading... and they usually face directly left =|




Chimachi and Chimolky are rather similar in their designs and poses. That's not necessarily a bad thing, but they don't have much fine detail - the feet have no toes, the faces have no mouths, and they don't have much in the way of coloring. Not having one of these things doesn't make it bad, but not having any of them makes the sprites look unfinished. They are cute designs though.


yeah.... i was gonna lighten chimachi alittle... and i guess i could add mouths to both... and chimolky's black part is suposed to be rock-like but idk how to do that D=





a new one:

Plasmion- fire / electric - spiriomon [it fails, i know... and i stink at thunderbolts. and the whole thing is kinda... off]

Esper
November 5th, 2010, 09:22 AM
a new one:

Plasmion- fire / electric - spiriomon [it fails, i know... and i stink at thunderbolts. and the whole thing is kinda... off]
The tail isn't bad. It looks like a lightning bolt. You could maybe make it more exaggerated and larger, but the basics are there.

What this sprite needs is more contrast. It's hard to make out each of the legs, and the details on the face as well. The anatomy is also a little strange with the large head, long-ish neck, and small body. The shading is a little haphazard and doesn't give much of a send of lighting and depth. That might be in part because of the lack of contrast, but overall it looks kind of flat. You could maybe make the two back legs (that is, not the hind legs, but the ones further away) darker and the remaining two lighter. That would give a sense of depth even if it's not perfect lighting. Just a suggestion.

KK Moloney
November 6th, 2010, 07:09 PM
did you make up the spiriomon concept because thats pretty cool but how do you use them in games than?

Kiryu
November 12th, 2010, 02:11 PM
@Scarf: yeah... =| i stink at yellow...... ill try and fix it when i find time.

@KK M: i guess im like a co-founder to spiriomon.... and i just help with making the creatures. i should probably update the thing in my sig >.>

Kiryu
November 14th, 2010, 06:01 PM
o and heres flats for a grass.....thingy >.>

tip it up on its face and its a monocot o3o

Kiryu
November 18th, 2010, 03:11 PM
....nothing...... great...

anyway here:

try at new shading style thingy: http://i1093.photobucket.com/albums/i438/WhiteEmber/Moukotain.png
plant with shading:http://i1093.photobucket.com/albums/i438/WhiteEmber/Unnamed.png
Kitty with pikachu's pallet for the yellow and better[?] shading:http://i1093.photobucket.com/albums/i438/WhiteEmber/Plasmionnewpalette.png
(http://i1093.photobucket.com/albums/i438/WhiteEmber/Moukotain.png)

sfalpharyu
November 18th, 2010, 05:32 PM
Your sprites are cool as are you fakemon like stated before the size is a little different but I look forward to seeing more

Kiryu
November 20th, 2010, 12:31 PM
thx~

ok then um anymore crits? the cat [*cough*Plasmion*cough*] obviously isnt done tho...

need a name for the plant thing... 3 stage evo final being a scorpion...

... yay my crap-sprites are perfect.

any crit for the latest? yez? noez?

Logiedan
November 23rd, 2010, 11:44 PM
Most of your sprites lack darker outline. So I suggest using black and dark colours for your lineart where the spots are shaded and aren't clearly exposed to your lightsource.

Also, please don't double post unless you have an update to make.

Kiryu
November 25th, 2010, 05:01 PM
"Also, please don't double post unless you have an update to make."

? i didnt DP w/o update... >.> anyway...


yeah sure k ill try to darken the lineart when i have time.

Kiryu
November 28th, 2010, 08:37 AM
eh ill work on Plasmion later...

heres its prevo.

Logiedan
November 28th, 2010, 08:45 AM
It's quite small and like your Plasmion sprite, it's lacking some black outline. The eyes aren't the best but it's decent. It's not very necessary to use that many hues of red for the whole pupil and sclera. For the tail, you could loosen up some shading. Overall it's a great sprite but the big problem I have with it is its size. Don't forget the new dimensions are 96x96!

Kiryu
November 28th, 2010, 09:37 AM
"For the tail, you could loosen up some shading"

meaning...?

and i was trying to stay away from black lines because that was my problem as a new spriter... then the lines were always too dark so i lightened them alittle now theyre supposed to be black AAAAAAAA *twitch*

yeah the eye is kinda weird... /changes

new dimensions...?

m k weird... these are for spiriomon so theyre usually 80x80 to 100x100...

EDIT: fixed eye/s

Logiedan
November 28th, 2010, 11:38 AM
When I mean loosen up on some shading, I mean to remove some. What you could do is draw up a light source to help you visualize where the highlights are and where you should shade.

Sometimes you'll have to blend in with the black outline to make it look better. Here's what i'm trying to say about blending:
http://i52.tinypic.com/ogb9et.jpg
There is a darker blue colour that is relatively close to black and it helps transition the black outline into the sky blue shade outline. (not the greatest example)
Edit: Here's another example, Slowpoke was the perfect example.
http://i53.tinypic.com/250teus.jpg
Look at the tail and its back, the outline gets lighter and lighter while it curves higher from the black outline.

I don't see how new dimension are weird. o_o.

The 100 Mega Shock
November 28th, 2010, 11:40 AM
As a general rule, black is appropriate for lining areas that are furthest away from the light source.

Kiryu
November 28th, 2010, 04:38 PM
sooo take away the shading for the tail? =/


EDIT: randombut bee-thing that evos into the thing to the right of it and some other alt that hasnt been designed yet...

Kiryu
December 1st, 2010, 03:29 PM
before -> after

any better?

Kiryu
December 4th, 2010, 12:00 PM
changed the eye outline...

no comments? must be perfect then. awesome.

noobiess
December 5th, 2010, 12:19 PM
wow the fire starters are awesome :)

Kiryu
December 6th, 2010, 04:17 PM
the fire lizards? thx though i dont think theyre the starters...

when i cant/dont-want-to post updates here theres some sprites here you people can crit [pls note not all are done by me...though most are =P] http://crowfan.deviantart.com/art/Spiriomon-Dex-176428056

sarah monster
December 6th, 2010, 04:56 PM
I actually quite like these! nice work! The colors are nice, and- to me at least suite each one!! :)

-ty-
December 11th, 2010, 11:11 PM
Dinomyte was executed very well; great design and concept with it. The only issue I am having with some of the sprites are the eyes. Many of them seem to be solid shaded almonds. I think if you study some other pokemon sprites you could improve their eyes.