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Claire
November 12th, 2004, 02:26 PM
This is a poem i wrote tonight...I know..i never write poems XD
It's basically the lessons to learn from wolves, about family, friends, and staying strong
The verse in brackets is kinda one i thought up, but doesnt go as well with the flow of the poem.


Spirit of the Wolf

Hunter by day, wanderer by night,
Follow me friend as we pass the stars' light.
My silver coat gleams, my eyes shine bright,
With confidence unshattering, so fear my might.

Freedom of the eagle, the strength of the bear,
The wisdom of the dolphin, and a soul filled with care.
All of these features and never alone:
My pack is my family, my life, my home,

And i am the leader, the alpha of all,
I will protect you if you heed my call.
Run with us, hunt with us, have no fear,
For if you are hurt, we are always near.

(The night is our lover for evermore,
With the moon as our guardian -an unspoken law.
Our respect never wavers as time goes on
So join us, dear friend, in our moonward song)

I ask you, sweet stranger, to never forget
To always have courage and never once fret.
So when you are scared that you may not win through
Just look through my eyes: find the wolf inside you.

Ryoutarou
November 12th, 2004, 02:42 PM
*claps* Very well done my sista! I rreally like it...it's kinda slow sometimes but that is kinda edged in with the message of it

Psychotic_Demon
November 12th, 2004, 02:49 PM
i loved it!^~ great job! keep up ta good work!


(i sound like a middle school teacher... O.o)

darkblastoise89
November 12th, 2004, 03:15 PM
nice job DF, not too verbose, not too short. easy to understand, but filled with thought ^ ^

Claire
November 12th, 2004, 03:54 PM
Thankyou everyone for your comments *huggles*

Kyosuke
November 12th, 2004, 09:48 PM
That was nice Claire, in a way it tells you how important friends can be if you get yourself in something, but reversed with wolves. I really did like it.

Claire
November 13th, 2004, 04:26 AM
Thankyou lance, yeah that's where i was coming from -reliance on strength within and on your friends *hugs*

Geometric-sama
November 14th, 2004, 04:24 PM
It's good, if a little too "sweet" for my taste. XD o_O Blue and you are siblings?

Claire
November 17th, 2004, 04:35 AM
heehee thanks JA
naw, blue and me aren't related XD he was just feeling a bit hyper and called me sista >.>

Deadeye Betty
November 17th, 2004, 01:11 PM
Truely lovely poem *heart*
I really like the simplicity of it, but it's done in such a way that it just resonates the images and thoughts that you were potraying. I would love to read some more of your work! ^_^

Claire
November 17th, 2004, 02:25 PM
aww thanks DB..if only i HAD more work XD

lizardman
November 19th, 2004, 04:33 PM
great job claire!(sticks out two thumbs)

Claire
November 19th, 2004, 04:35 PM
Thankyou lizard, im glad you liked it ^^

Koga_LUVer
November 19th, 2004, 10:14 PM
That was a greta poem!I really liked it.As I read it I could just imagine and see what you wrote of.It's really great.I do hope you'll do more poems sometime.

Claire
November 20th, 2004, 03:31 AM
Thankies Koga, im glad ^^ *huggles*

.Socks
November 20th, 2004, 09:51 PM
More! More!! **, 10/10-!! Lot's of feeling, rhyming, touching, I could imagine it as i read it!! *-*http://jupiter.walagata.com/w/digiham/HamsterRequests/8265595.gif

Kelsey
November 23rd, 2004, 06:54 PM
HO-LY EFFING CHEESE FRIES! Claire, I am serious when I say this: that poem was pehaps the best I have ever read anywhere! I promise this is no lie, seeing as I adore wolves above all else, this poem literally made me cry!! X3 I give your poem a full 10/10!! *glomps* Great work Claire, you did an awsome job!

~Kelsey