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Superjub
July 5th, 2010, 11:51 AM
Yup, another one. :D Decided to upload my newest sprites. If you want to see all of them, click here (http://superjub.deviantart.com/).

So, lets get this underway... :D


Fakémon Sprites
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/074/a/a/Jokester_Collection_by_Superjub.png Overused dithering is overused. :laugh: Meh, I like the backsprite. :D
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/070/7/6/Ghost_Backsprites_by_Superjub.png I like these. :D You can find the fornt sprites on my DeviantArt. Can't be bothered to post them. :P I think i improved the backsprites and posted them somewhere on the forum, not sure. :\
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/043/4/9/Babeel_AGAIN_by_Superjub.png Good ol' eel. Sprited the fron ages ago, went back to improve it, and made a backsprite too. :D
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/028/3/f/Tadittle____again_XD_by_Superjub.png It's meant to be a frog. :tired: Meh, I like it. :P It's uber happy! :D
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/024/9/6/Squidlet____again_by_Superjub.png It's... a squid. :P



Trainer Sprites
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/059/3/8/OLD_Student_Trainer_Sprite_by_Superjub.png -> http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/059/e/d/Student_Trainer_Sprite_by_Superjub.png After years of practice, I know longer sprite bodybuilding little girls. :D



Icons
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/137/a/0/Sword_Icon_by_Superjub.png First icon I made. I think it turned out alright! :D
http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/6708/bluepotionblackoutline.png A blue potion.
http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/9263/redpotionblackoutline.png A red potion.
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/831/firestaffblackoutline.png A staff.
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/7103/waterstaffblackoutline.png Another type of staff.
http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/9174/moneybagwithoutblackout.png (http://img709.imageshack.us/i/moneybagwithoutblackout.png/) A standard money bag.
http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/6255/moneybagwithblackoutlin.png A money bag with the dollar sign.









Post away! Don't forget good ol' constructive criticism! ;)

Esper
July 6th, 2010, 05:32 PM
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/074/a/a/Jokester_Collection_by_Superjub.png

This is a good start to a sprite. Dithering aside, the shading could be improved a little. That outstretched arm shows three levels of shading, which is a good start, but it's positioning isn't how light would fall onto an arm, which is more or less a cylindrical object. The lightest level only extends halfway up the arm even though the entire arm would have the same level of shading, or highlighting as it is in this case. The kind of concentric shading it has is more appropriate to a spherical or rounded object.

Superjub
July 7th, 2010, 07:56 AM
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/074/a/a/Jokester_Collection_by_Superjub.png

This is a good start to a sprite. Dithering aside, the shading could be improved a little. That outstretched arm shows three levels of shading, which is a good start, but it's positioning isn't how light would fall onto an arm, which is more or less a cylindrical object. The lightest level only extends halfway up the arm even though the entire arm would have the same level of shading, or highlighting as it is in this case. The kind of concentric shading it has is more appropriate to a spherical or rounded object.

Finally, a post! :P

Thanks for the tip. :) I'll edit the sprite when I get time. :D Also, the front sprite was made agea go, so that's why it is of a low quality. :P

FreedomFighter011
July 8th, 2010, 11:34 PM
I can't really offer a good explanation on how to change it, but I think the shading needs some work. Otherwise, they're all pretty good! Oh, and your last two sprites (the moneybag ones) are the same.

Superjub
July 9th, 2010, 07:04 AM
I can't really offer a good explanation on how to change it, but I think the shading needs some work. Otherwise, they're all pretty good! Oh, and your last two sprites (the moneybag ones) are the same.

Thanks for the heads up about the moneybag sprites. xD

FreedomFighter011
July 9th, 2010, 02:17 PM
Thanks for the heads up about the moneybag sprites. xD

lol No problem, can't wait to see more from you =)

Superjub
July 10th, 2010, 02:54 AM
UPDATE: Here are some of the icons, without black outlines. What do you think?

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/4535/bluepotionwithoutline.png (http://img20.imageshack.us/i/bluepotionwithoutline.png/)
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/2657/firestaffwithoutline.png (http://img6.imageshack.us/i/firestaffwithoutline.png/)
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/8974/swordwithoutline.png (http://img208.imageshack.us/i/swordwithoutline.png/)
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/5695/waterstaffwithoutline.png (http://img12.imageshack.us/i/waterstaffwithoutline.png/)

FreedomFighter011
July 10th, 2010, 01:23 PM
I like it best without the completely-black outlines. It makes it seem more "3-D"

Professor W.
July 12th, 2010, 02:21 PM
You're sprites are good, but I think you need you need to work on shading. Otherwise, I can't really notice anything bad about it. Keep it up!

Aeneas
July 14th, 2010, 02:12 PM
I love you I can not criticize anything are very good and I hope you continue with the sprites

Superjub
July 26th, 2010, 03:18 PM
UPDATE!

It's been aaaaaages since I updated. :S Anyway, continuing with my icons, here is a bow sprite. :)

http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/3871/bowb.png (http://img707.imageshack.us/i/bowb.png/)

Esper
July 26th, 2010, 06:50 PM
UPDATE!

It's been aaaaaages since I updated. :S Anyway, continuing with my icons, here is a Crossbow sprite. :)

http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/3871/bowb.png (http://img707.imageshack.us/i/bowb.png/)
I think that's called just a bow. Anyway, it's nice and simple, but perhaps you'd get the string to look better if you made it at a 45 degree angle so it wouldn't have that slight jaggedy look.

Superjub
July 27th, 2010, 02:16 PM
I think that's called just a bow. Anyway, it's nice and simple, but perhaps you'd get the string to look better if you made it at a 45 degree angle so it wouldn't have that slight jaggedy look.

I meant to say shortbow. xD *facepalm*

Thanks for the advice. I think it looks much better! :D

http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/1954/shortbow.png (http://img819.imageshack.us/i/shortbow.png/)