milotic /star/

[sk8erboi]

here's my first card from the set, milotic /star/

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v511/pkmnfreak111/ex_starlight/exstarlight-01-milotic-star.jpg


please criticize/rate/whatever.... :)

[IceKitten]

OMG when they gonna make one with Recover?

[AdamHays]

Great card,i like how it comes out of the box.

[Zootster]

Nice Card! I still cant figure out what that star symbol means though (yes ive seen the Torchic, Mudkip, and Treeko ones). Does it mean shiny??

[AdamHays]

It means it is a shiny pokemon,check out the new Team Rockets revenge EX cards,and you'll see it on the shiny 3rd generation starters.Nice card again^^.

[sk8erboi]

thanks guys... anyways, i've got two more cards up!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v511/pkmnfreak111/ex_starlight/exstarlight-02-kyogre-star.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v511/pkmnfreak111/ex_starlight/exstarlight-08-gyarados-star.jpg

hope you like 'em too!!

[The Vince Knight]

9/10 For all the work!
The Milotic card Is a stage 1 so you should put a stage 1 on it not a basic.

[mewruler]

OOH shiny ahhh my eyes

by the way that was a compliment.

[Kylie-chan]

(Please read my sig and find out about my mangled posts dare from PazzKat. [Lovey-dovey to above poster.])

Oh wow such a wonderful, perfect compliment! I would glow if I could make a card like that and get such a remark! oooh so kind so wonderful!

*pukes* Disgusting. Now for a bit of sense. (Mean old PazzKat. j/k)

OK, the card is pretty cool, except for that basic-pokemon error, but yeah, everyone makes a mistake. It's a pretty cool card, although the way Milotic comes out of the picture frame too far is a bit irregular. You definitely made a good card. Although it isn't the greatest card, it's better than some exes, I believe.

Nice job! *scurries off to the Zeo for inspiration*

'Kay, the Kyogre is a bit unbelievably strong, although its mean old energy costs (for Underwater Flipper and retreat) are, well, mean. The Gyarados is more balanced, but the Milotic is a more attractive card.

[sk8erboi]

well, yeah, that's the catch. i can't seem to find any stage 1 or 2 pokemon /star/ blanks. it's also a fact that shining gyarados from neo revelations is a basic pokemon. :)

[Kylie-chan]

Easy to fix, just tiny details. Take a Stage 1 blank of any Advance card, rip the stage 1 segment off, stick it on over the Basic, insert the text, and insert the piccy! :)

[sk8erboi]

nah, leaving them as basic pokemon is alright with me. i'm working on groudon /star/ right now.

[Kylie-chan]

kewl. pm me when it's done, kay? i want to see it.

EDIT - Augh. I am so sick of people giving me bad rep. *puts on squeaky sing-song voice* stay on topic, please! *normal voice, undertone of grumpiness* How was I off-topic? 1. I commented. 2nd post. I gave some advice. 3rd post. I asked him to tell me when it was done as subscribing is a pain for the inbox.

Who the heck is out there doing stuff like that?!

[ravenstorture]

Those are ok cards. Good job!:)

[Alex_]

i like them good job i like the way they kinda go out if the card ...

[sk8erboi]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v511/pkmnfreak111/ex_starlight/exstarlight-03-groudon-star.jpg


please critic me. i'm thinking he's unbalanced, but i like him that way... oh, and the pic's a bit fuzzy, yeah... anyways, critic me :) :)

[Alex_]

hmm, yes as you said the pic is a it fuzzy but thats not a big prob its pretty good overall 8/10

[Shadow]

Great card,i like how it comes out of the box.
All new shiny Pokemon do that.
9/10 For all the work!
The Milotic card Is a stage 1 so you should put a stage 1 on it not a basic.
All shiny Pokemon are basics in the TCG. Look back at Neo Destiny.

And excellent cards. The fonts seem right. Not completely error free though so it's NITPICKING TIME!

Milotic: You're missing a space inbetween are and fewer in the Pokebody.

Gyarados: Second attack seems underpowered as other cards can do 30 damage to both Defending Pokemon for 2 of the same energy.

Kyogre: Seems a bit overpowered since it disables all fire Pokemon. First attack seems kind of overpowered as well.

Groudon: Body is overpowered too (if people ran pure fire and water decks and each had these two in play, nothing could attack XD) and so does the first attack.

General shiny nitpicking: Most of the new shinies' pictures do not go below the bottom of the picture frame, I believe (not totally sure though). Most shinies also ahve at least 3 different types of energies required to attack (it's just a tradition and not required if you don't want it in your cards).

Overall, 8.5/10

[Kylie-chan]

That is one freaking strong card.

As I just got out of the shower and my eyes are a bit funny, well the picture is fuzzy but like someone said, not a problem, so to be safe for any errors 9/10.

It is a feast for the eyes.

[IceKitten]

I draw my Pokémon cards that I make, and then I use a rubbish Pokémon card for the template and selotape it.

^ ^

I drew a Metagross with 200 HP o__O

I don't have a scanner though =/ So I can't show you's my 00ber drawings

[MiNuN*]

8/10. Don't see many things wrong, but though, it can't be perfect.
I only scanned your cards, so I can't give you a full review, but I know, the images are translucent.. and Milotic deserves more than 2 retreat cost. Groudon is overpowered. Way, over powered. If you were vsing misty of some sort that card would be pure invincible and many people will find many ways to abuse that card. Same with Kyogre.
The Gyradoes is okay, but the underpowered attack will be the problem there.
In overall, you did a pretty good job. Improve.
Signed, Akira

[Intuition]

Really a nice card! I like that it reaches out of the box ^^ 7.5/10!

[Kari Kagome & Mewtwo]

Those are the older Shining blanks, just so you know. The wording for the ruling is different on the official shining pokes in EX: TRR. Fangking already fixed them up, so they should be at his site (i'll post the link later)

[sk8erboi]

he did? well, i might just use the old shiny blanks for this set. thanks for telling me, though. i'll get them in a while. anyways, i'm still working on espeon /star/. i'll post it once it's done... (which i hope will be sometime today) :D

[Ash_Pokemaster]

Milotic Star:
> Cool card, I like it's pose, It's great. Milotic's hair are so beautiful I'm giving to that picture 9/10
> A BIG mistake, Milotic is Stage 2 not Basic, so you must correct it and put as preevolution Feebas
> On Poke-Body at the parenthesis () you are write arefewer damage, correct it to: are fewer damage
> Generally I'm giving to Milotic Star 8/10

Kyogre Star:
> I don't like the Picture so much, you must make it more pink as a shiny Kyogre
> Attacks are ok
> Poke-body is not good, you see with this Poke-body Kyogre Star is unbeatable for Fire trainers (like me) so maybe let the ability for Rayquaza but remove it for all fire Pokemon
> Generally, I'm giving to this card 6/10

Gyarados Star:
> Cool picture, the best of all I'm giving to it 11/10 XD
> Good Poke-Body, but what is the serie with moon
> Good Attacks
> Generally, I'm giving to this card 8.5/10

Groudon Star:
> Cool picture I like it very much
> For the Poke-Body the same with the Kyogre Star one
> Attacks are ok

I'm looking forward for the Espeon Star card