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Professor W.
August 1st, 2010, 12:27 PM
Hello there, I have been spriting for a while, so here is my work.

This is my recent work:


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4766&pictureid=45874

Ambuslice- The Lethal Pokemon- Evolves from Kricketune via level-up knowing X-Scissor while holding a Razor Claw- Their blades are the sharper than any any other known substance- Bug/Steel

High Attack and Defense, good speed, but abyssmal Sp. Atk and Sp. Def.


Here is my older work-




http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4766&pictureid=39365

Lvl. 1- Zapegg- Spider Larva Pokemon- It can't walk, so it rolls around to move. Bug/Electric (Yeah, I know it sucks, don't bother commenting on it)

Lvl. 16- Elantula- Electric Spider Pokemon- It's jaws are known to conduct large amounts of electricity. Bug/Electric

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4766&pictureid=38208

Lvl. 1- Munchipul- Bitten Apple Pokemon- They walk around gardens, stealing crops. Grass/Ghost

Dusk Stone- Munchitree- Apple Tree Pokemon- They serve as parents to Munchipul, and try to keep them from getting into mischief. Grass/Ghost

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4766&pictureid=35124

Lvl. 1- Trilock- Key Pokemon- They aimlessly float around tombs and temples. Steel/Psychic

Lvl. 35- Keyriska- Key Pokemon- They guard tombs and temples by scaring away intruders. Steel/Psychic

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4766&pictureid=38209

Lvl. 1- Deepray- Deep Fish Pokemon- They sink to the bottom of the ocean because they aren't strong enough to swim upwards. Water/Dark

Level-Up Knowing Ancient Power- Crawlbite- Trilobite Pokemon- They crawl at the bottom of the sea and use sonar to track prey. Water/Dark

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4766&pictureid=34267

Lvl. 1- Sporslide- Mushroom Pokemon- They slide and hop on their mushroom that serves as a foot. Bug/Poison

Lvl. 18- Crawlspore- Mushroom Crab Pokemon- They slip on their rounded mushroom feet. Bug/Poison

Lvl. 32- Sporoll- Mushroom Shell Pokemon- Their mushroom shell is so hard that one could fall off a mountain with no harm.



I hope you enjoy them,

~Prof. W.

Dankesque
August 1st, 2010, 04:29 PM
I could tell just by looking at the picture that Ambuslice was related to Kriketune. I like it. And Trilock/Keyriska are really imaginative!

One thing with Ambuslice, though: its eyes look kind of soulless. If that's the effect you're going for, then you're spot on, but otherwise, maybe you could add some highlights to them?

Professor W.
August 1st, 2010, 05:53 PM
I could tell just by looking at the picture that Ambuslice was related to Kriketune. I like it. And Trilock/Keyriska are really imaginative!

One thing with Ambuslice, though: its eyes look kind of soulless. If that's the effect you're going for, then you're spot on, but otherwise, maybe you could add some highlights to them?

Thanks! Ambuslice's eyes are intended to be kind of souless, it is almost made to represent some kind of cold-blooded killer. In fact, it was originally to be Bug/Dark (which would be awesome) but with all of the blades and claws, I decided for it to be Bug/Steel instead. Thanks again,

~Prof. W.

Silver25
August 1st, 2010, 05:58 PM
First time going through the Pixel Art part of the fourm. And I really like what I see, great job!

One thing on the Crawlbite, to me it just doesn't seem like a pokemon evolution. I can see they are different, but not by much. This is just me but (and remember I am inexperienced in spriting) maybe if you either altered the color or size of Crawlbite that might help.

And that first one has a somewhat complicated evolution lol but I really like it. Again, great job and very imaginative.

Professor W.
August 1st, 2010, 06:08 PM
First time going through the Pixel Art part of the fourm. And I really like what I see, great job!

One thing on the Crawlbite, to me it just doesn't seem like a pokemon evolution. I can see they are different, but not by much. This is just me but (and remember I am inexperienced in spriting) maybe if you either altered the color or size of Crawlbite that might help.

And that first one has a somewhat complicated evolution lol but I really like it. Again, great job and very imaginative.

Oh, thanks! I see what you mean on Crawlbite, it's does not have a massive difference. Deepray actually used to have a split evolution, but it didn't look good enough so I removed it. It's currently lost in history, the only way for it to be seen is if somebody infiltrates my house to access my sketches. But I see what you mean, but Crawlbite is pretty old, but I plan on redoing some of my older sprites one day. Maybe even some of the first ones I made that few people have seen. If I do, I'll think about that once I get to Crawlbite. Thanks again,

~Prof. W.

Dankesque
August 1st, 2010, 06:35 PM
Thanks! Ambuslice's eyes are intended to be kind of souless, it is almost made to represent some kind of cold-blooded killer. In fact, it was originally to be Bug/Dark (which would be awesome) but with all of the blades and claws, I decided for it to be Bug/Steel instead. Thanks again,

~Prof. W.
Well, you done good then; he really gives me the heebie-jeebies. I think he could still work well as a Bug/Dark even with all the blades...

Deathstar
August 1st, 2010, 06:44 PM
Ambuslice is very good for now. The lines need to be improved; smooth them out, make them look better. Then shading needs to be improved, make it more defined. Other than that, it is good. But keep working on it!

As for the others, they don't look like Pokemon, exept for Trilock and it's evo. Most of their lines are jagged, and don't define what the Pokemon's shape is supposed to be. Shading is a must work on, I can't see in some of them where the shading is supposed to be. If they were shaded right, they would look like Pokemon. Sporslide looks funny, and it really needs to improve, it doesn't look like a Pokemon, just a wierd object. When I say Pokemon, take a Pokemon Sprite from the games and compare it, do they look like them?

Not trying to be mean, but just trying to get my point across.

Professor W.
August 1st, 2010, 07:01 PM
Ambuslice is very good for now. The lines need to be improved; smooth them out, make them look better. Then shading needs to be improved, make it more defined. Other than that, it is good. But keep working on it!

As for the others, they don't look like Pokemon, exept for Trilock and it's evo. Most of their lines are jagged, and don't define what the Pokemon's shape is supposed to be. Shading is a must work on, I can't see in some of them where the shading is supposed to be. If they were shaded right, they would look like Pokemon. Sporslide looks funny, and it really needs to improve, it doesn't look like a Pokemon, just a wierd object. When I say Pokemon, take a Pokemon Sprite from the games and compare it, do they look like them?

Not trying to be mean, but just trying to get my point across.

I appreciate the critique- but all of the others are pretty old, from about 3/4 to 1/2 a year ago. I understand that Ambuslice needs work, and I'll work on him. The thing is- I don't understand your comment on shading, I don't see the point you're trying to get across. I'm not trying to defensive- sorry if I am. I appreciate the critique and I'll keep working on it!

~Prof. W.

Deathstar
August 2nd, 2010, 06:23 AM
Shading as in, making it where people can see it better.

Professor W.
August 2nd, 2010, 06:30 AM
Shading as in, making it where people can see it better.

Ohhh... I see where you're going. I think I can pull that off.

~Prof. W.