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altariaking
August 8th, 2010, 03:38 PM
Here are my sprites and stuff.

Fusions
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/Dodrevil.png
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/Gen2splice.png
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/BlueDino.png
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/DarkMaster.png
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/swordthingdude.png
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/skulldude.png

Fakemon
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/Corsweet-1.png


WSC
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/WSC93.png93
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/KantoStarters.png92
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/MrMimeandGardevoir-1.png91


Tiles
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/TreeandGrasstiles.png
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/bookshelf.png

Pixel art
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/Porygon.png

Logiedan
August 8th, 2010, 03:57 PM
hey! I didn't know you were here on PC. I've seen you around Serebii.

About that Corsola pre-evolution,I like it alot, the lineart is smooth but I feel that the grey head could use some darker outline and a brighter highlight.

altariaking
August 8th, 2010, 04:04 PM
Would You like to help out with my fan game Pokemon New Dawn?
No. I'm too busy spriting for my hack.

hey! I didn't know you were here on PC. I've seen you around Serebii.

About that Corsola pre-evolution,I like it alot, the lineart is smooth but I feel that the grey head could use some darker outline and a brighter highlight.

lol, I joined here ages ago, what's your name on serebii?
yeah, a lot of people have said the outline wasn't dark enough, I'll see what I can do about that :)

Logiedan
August 8th, 2010, 04:09 PM
I'm Digit,though. Honestly,i only came to the serebii forums for the spriting contest.
I can't really criticize on your fusions since they're only decent fusions,but the Dodrio fusion is really nice. Though it's difficult to see what you used,mostly with the flying bat and flying ghost thing. D;

altariaking
August 8th, 2010, 04:16 PM
I'm Digit,though. Honestly,i only came to the serebii forums for the spriting contest.
I can't really criticize on your fusions since they're only decent fusions,but the Dodrio fusion is really nice. Though it's difficult to see what you used,mostly with the flying bat and flying ghost thing. D;

thanks, I made it for a contest so it's supposed to be hard to see them lol
I used Tangela Dodrio and Haunter
here's a video of it (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qARkv-yPQFc)

http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/SomeCustomTiles.png
Some tiles I made about a week ago that I forgot about until now.

NovaStar
August 8th, 2010, 04:18 PM
Yeah I've seen you too (FireFox13 on Serebii). Anyways, the problem with your fusions is that they're all over the place, body parts are scattered every which way which makes it confusing.

Your fakemon I like, although as Logiedan said the sprite need to have a darker outline and I think that the top half needs to be lighter, other than that it's looking great.

The tiles are fine but I'm not too well situated in that area.

Finally, your pixel art doesn't look to hot. You might need to work on it's linework and shading.

Spherical Ice
August 9th, 2010, 02:43 AM
The pixel art doesn't really seem like pixel art, moreso weight x3 lines with default colours pasted in to make a Porygon. There's hardly any noticeable shading, dithering (which is suggested for work as large as that) or variation in coloured outlines.

altariaking
August 9th, 2010, 04:57 AM
The pixel art doesn't really seem like pixel art, moreso weight x3 lines with default colours pasted in to make a Porygon. There's hardly any noticeable shading, dithering (which is suggested for work as large as that) or variation in coloured outlines.

yeah, I admit I rushed the porygon.

Hers is a fusion of Dewgong and Gahstly
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/GastlyGirl.png
It looks like a female Shuppet xD

altariaking
August 12th, 2010, 03:16 PM
needz moar comentz
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/Sprites/ChikoritaCustom.png

Jrx
August 12th, 2010, 10:54 PM
I liked Tangela-Dodrio the most from the fusions, awesome looking ^_^

altariaking
August 21st, 2010, 07:54 AM
thanks, here is a new fakemon, credit goes to ZOMB135 for the concept art: (http://z0mb13s.deviantart.com/art/Fire-Tapir-Fakemon-164416648)
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/Fire_Tapir_Fakemon_by_Z0MB13S-sprite.png

Hitsugiya
August 21st, 2010, 02:33 PM
the recolers were a little to bright but all in all i loved every 1

altariaking
August 24th, 2010, 03:26 PM
New rule: Crit helps me sprite better, if you're going to post please tell me everything you like or hate, it'll help a lot.

http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/Sprites/50SubsSprite.png
Made in a 50 subs special on youtube, the video hasn't been uploaded yet, so until then I'll leave you to ponder on what Pokemon I may have used :P
Some are really obvious though.

Astaravia
August 26th, 2010, 02:14 AM
The colourful pokemon are really great. Would like to see more of those!

Aragh
August 29th, 2010, 03:44 PM
The new fakemon looks pretty good, the only problem I saw was that it's a little hard to distinguish where the front leg ends and the mouth/snout begins. The shading looks good though, and it's a nice concept.

altariaking
August 30th, 2010, 09:34 AM
hey! hey! hey!

Can you make me a fakemon? please!, im so bad making sprites... :(

If you can make it, i want the sprite like a snowball an it evolution, a snowman

Only if you can and want. if you don't want make it, doesn't matter

Ah! yours sprites are cool!
Go away, and do not post here again, I don't make sprites for random people.

The new fakemon looks pretty good, the only problem I saw was that it's a little hard to distinguish where the front leg ends and the mouth/snout begins. The shading looks good though, and it's a nice concept.
Thanks, I'll fix that once I get the time yay for finally getting some crit

Now, some of these are good....some are bad....but, here is my public tileset.
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/PublicTileset.png

Sora's Nobody
August 30th, 2010, 09:46 AM
So, pretty good, some of it. But the porygon is NOT pixel art. Its is a drawing made with the paint line tool. And that is not pizel art. Also i can see some problems with your tree. It doesent look like a tree, i would round it bite. and smooth out were it sticks out. Oh and that was harsh on the "Noob" I mean he was just asking, Why couldnt you just have said "Sorry, no. I don't take requests."