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Kuromi
September 14th, 2010, 03:01 PM
These are my scratch sprites. I'm still practicing. Most are non Pokemon.

Popn Music.

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/57/sigbf.pnghttp://img230.imageshack.us/img230/6028/74412878.gifhttp://img80.imageshack.us/img80/1426/72648384.gif

Esper
September 15th, 2010, 07:34 AM
Hi there. Just so you know, the rules say you need a minimum of four pieces of work to start your own thread. That means I'll temporarily lock this thread, but when you have one more piece to add just let me know and I can unlock it for you.

As for feedback on your sprites what stands out to me most is your line work. In a lot of places they seem to have a 'tetris block' feel. This is what I mean:

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4467&pictureid=36874

You can make smoother looking outlines by removing a lot of unnecessary pixels, which is particularly helpful for smaller, detailed areas.

So, yeah, just let me know when you have another piece of work.