PDA

View Full Version : Rashoumon's stuff for Hieros Gamos + Others


Rashoumon
January 4th, 2011, 09:01 PM
These are for a game I'm developing but I figure I'd get more sprite critique here as opposed to the game dev section.

All scratch, some outlines and concepts are by other people which will be noted. NOT POKEMON.

http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/tarpit-3.gifhttp://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/dwartle4color-2.gifhttp://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/grid.gifhttp://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/dhaquid1-2.gif
Above all by me
http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/sylphen4-4.gifhttp://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/airphibian1.gifhttp://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/airphibian2-1.gif
Outline and design by BynineB, shading by me
http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/intraccnid1.gif
Design by Zarkanorf

Everything below this line is not for Hieros Gamos
_______
http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/trollssofar-1.gif
http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/vriska-1.gif
Troll portraits (Homestuck)

http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/rosechibi-1.gif
Rose chibi, made on my base (Homestuck once again)

Fantastique
January 4th, 2011, 09:21 PM
O___O
You must have a LOT of patience for this kind of stuff. Seriously. These are amazing o:

Is it wrong that I find the first one cute? Rofl.

Logiedan
January 4th, 2011, 10:22 PM
http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/grid.gif

This sprite is great, the two problems I have is first, her right arm looks oddly positioned and bent. Second is that your selective outlining bothers me, like on the arms where you've used a blue colour for the outline which isn't related to the skin colour, though I do get the point of you trying to stop using so much colours and all.

tnguye3
January 5th, 2011, 03:25 PM
Woah those are great!
They remind me of those sprites from the old Final Fantasy Games. ^_^
I love your shading and overall your proportions, it really makes it feel like the sprites are the real deal. :)

Rashoumon
January 7th, 2011, 08:27 PM
http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/grid.gif

This sprite is great, the two problems I have is first, her right arm looks oddly positioned and bent. Second is that your selective outlining bothers me, like on the arms where you've used a blue colour for the outline which isn't related to the skin colour, though I do get the point of you trying to stop using so much colours and all.

Yeah, I'm still working on the arms. Outlines being that way will stay, just.. less outlines.

http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/intraccnid2-1.gif
Intraccnid Rank 2

http://i995.photobucket.com/albums/af72/CrimsonHalls/facesample.gif

Facesets for Intraccnid, Airphibian and Mause

Blaziquaza
January 7th, 2011, 10:36 PM
Generally, I like your shading style. But Intraccnid R2 seems... rough. The outlines aren't too smooth.