DBZ comic

[Logmon1]

Sprit credits go to PokemonChampion2K4 and StarWarsPokemonAdventure
any way I'm geting into making comics and heres the frest one http://img111.exs.cx/img111/4782/comic16ss.png

What do you think?

[PokemonChampion2K4]

work on the spelling but other than that good

[Logmon1]

Cool thanks and thanks agen for the sprits!

[PokemonChampion2K4]

If ya need any more u know where to come

[Logmon1]

I didn't know what battle pose to put Goku in so I just made him stand ther.

[Goatman56]

nice comic its pretty cool

[Logmon1]

http://img94.exs.cx/img94/1940/comic21ym.png

Ha Ha see it isn't just a rip off of the cartoon. Oh and by BTW I'm taking sugestins for the story.

[Logmon1]

http://img105.exs.cx/img105/514/comic35nn.png Sorry for DPing.

[Goatman56]

nice comic its pretty cool

[Logmon1]

http://img58.exs.cx/img58/1541/comic46yc.png You should see the last pannle.

[Goatman56]

nice its cool vegeta noooo but were is the coolest character of all Tien

[Logmon1]

I'll get sprits for him ASAP. hers a snek peek of #6 http://img127.exs.cx/img127/6733/comic61df.png

[Logmon1]

http://img62.exs.cx/img62/7113/comic59or.png Ok I know there's no moon but it's my comic.

[Goatman56]

cool nice one he got all smushed

[Suz]

tee hee comic...
me like comic!!!

[Logmon1]

Say Hello to number 6

P.S. I couldin't get it up on imegshak.

[Logmon1]

http://img102.exs.cx/img102/9683/comic73eq.png Sorry agen for DPing but people won't reply!!!!!!!!

[EVA02]

hey logmon1 this is really good and ill rate it
drama 8/10
suspence 10/10
spelling 3/10
overall 9.9.999.9/10
is that really a number dont ask me

[Logmon1]

http://img97.exs.cx/img97/1993/comic81vl.png And that is a real number.

[Goatman56]

hey Logmon u wouldn't mind if I animated all thats been going on so far would u?

[Logmon1]

No I wouldint mind. Oh and can you give me a link to an anamator downlod?

[Goatman56]

uhhh go to google and type in gif movie creator the download will be the second one

[Goatman56]

sry for the dp but its gif movie gear sry I forgot hope that helps

[Logmon1]

That thing is sweet thaks!http://img50.exs.cx/img50/9206/comic94rx.png There looking for the spacship.

[Goatman56]

lol that ones really funny

[Logmon1]

Thanks I wanted to get Buu out of the way.

[Logmon1]

http://img87.exs.cx/img87/6484/comic102dw.png my edit buttin wodn't let me add the pic.

[Goatman56]

ummm what is with everyone killing goku

[Logmon1]

They never kill goko! http://img127.exs.cx/img127/4927/comic116om.png

[Gohan]

they don't kill Goku huh?thats cool logmon1.keep up the good work.

[Logmon1]

Hes not dead! He's just out of it.

[Goatman56]

but hes always out of it he hasn't even fought once

[Logmon1]

http://img75.exs.cx/img75/772/comic128oy.png Happy now?

[PokemonChampion2K4]

good job with your comic keep it up

[Logmon1]

Thanks http://img94.exs.cx/img94/1568/comic138we.png People I need you to post!!!!!!!

[Logmon1]

People this is the last time I will dp I just want to tell you this: I NEED YOU TO REPLY TO THIS THRAD SO I DON"T GET BAND FOR DPING!

[Gohan]

haha.keep up the good work logmon1!!I liked the part when Vegets started telling his joke.haha good!!

[Logmon1]

Can you take a guss who was saying "Are we ther yet?"

[Goatman56]

hmmmm this is ver hard thinking is not something I do best

[Logmon1]

Yep say did you get my PM Goatman?

[Goatman56]

yes I did but I can't fit 4 people on the same thing so choose which ones u want

[Logmon1]

Ok how bought Vageta and Cell. http://img74.exs.cx/img74/171/comic140hj.png Look collsly at the window.

[Gohan]

hah they've arrived on Namek!!I think Goku said 'are we there yet?'

[NancyWalkerScully2004]

What???? oh i see it now, good job logmon keep it up!

[Logmon1]

Sorry I havin't posted a comic in awail but I'm still waiting for some sprits.

[NancyWalkerScully2004]

So am I, StarWars would alreaqdy have them to you Logmon, but he got banned for awhile.......... they need to hurry up dont they Logmon?

[Logmon1]

Ya say was he DPing alot when you two got parid? And now the momit you'v all been waiting for! *Erey music plays* http://img92.exs.cx/img92/6156/comic155fk.png It... It's Alive!

[NancyWalkerScully2004]

Ok, yes he was DP alot when we got paired.........

[O]

Hmmm A pretty good effect for fusion in paint, but you need to improve on a lot of things.

First, Spelling. I am presuming that Oh shot is Oh Shoot

Vageta is Vegeta

Goko is Goku
I won't kill you on the names because everyone has a different way... But you really have to work on your spelling. And also, make panels (not panuls). Proper Panels with the line tool. It looks much more neat and professional.

I advise you to do textboxes, it gives you a much better idea of who's speaking.

[Logmon1]

I don't like text boxis. And I give a pritty good Idea of who's talking.

[O]

Listen, this is to help you improve. I have used your most recent comic and I have made remarks on the grammar. Of course, if you want to continue your comic like this and never really improve I can't stop you. I'm not saying that your comic is bad. I'm just saying how you can improve.

In the First Panel, 'What Happened?' Who is saying 'What Happened' Is it Goku or Vegeta? In the 2nd panel who is saying 'What The?' And in the 3rd Panel, is Goku and Vegeta saying Oh Come On as if they think Frieza and Coola are doing something stupid? Or if Frieza telling Coola to fuse with him?

[Logmon1]

Dose it relly matter that much who says what? http://img37.exs.cx/img37/8905/comic164pq.png

[Sawyer]

yes, it matters. also, you really need to improve your spelling. "oh shot" was where i got confuzzled.

[Logmon1]

Hay this is my comic ok? And can't what your doing be consederd flaming?

[StarWarsPokemonAdventure]

I think its great logmon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Logmon1]

People I won't post another comic for awile because I'm working on a spicle 20+ pannle one.

[Sawyer]

no logmon1, it's not flaming, i'm telling you how to IMPROVE. I'm telling you where i got confused, but if you'd rather argue with me, that's fine.

[O]

Its not considered rude if someone gives you advice. Spelling does need more work. Have you seen a real sprite comic? One that is really famous? If you haven't, you should. I'm thinkin of doing a Sprite Comic guide sometime soon.

[Logmon1]

Ok in the sperit of cirsmis I'v decider to post this! http://img134.exs.cx/img134/4899/santa1ja.png

[StarWarsPokemonAdventure]

Funny logmon.................................................................*Bad Frieza!!!!!*

[Logmon1]

Ya I'm going for trying to make them funny and still sureus. And have them make scins. http://img51.exs.cx/img51/5509/comic176zh.png

[Logmon1]

can somebody move this to the sprit comic form?

[StarWarsPokemonAdventure]

PM a mod Logmon1, then they will move it for you,...........................b.b.b.b.b.b.

[Logmon1]

http://img73.exs.cx/img73/6936/comic183nn.png Plese note that I get all my sprits from http://pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=24696

[O]

Spelling really, really needs more work. I know that english might be your second language, but it really does need more work. From your Cooler summoning Porunga...

Porunga- Who has summoned me? State your wish! Or else!

Cooler- I wish I had power! Ultimate power!

Porunga- So it is wished it shall be

You really have to improve. Your spellings are still readable, so you know what the word means, but it really needs improving if you want readers other than SWPA and me was really wants to see any improvements.

[Logmon1]

Just so you know the fushin's name is Coora. http://img46.exs.cx/img46/8626/comic196rz.png

[PokemonChampion2K4]

that is funny godzilla killing kid buu and ssj4 gojeta XD

[Logmon1]

Do you like how he gose through the lines?

[O]

That's an OK effect, by how did godzilla appear out of nowhere? you need to explain.

[Logmon1]

He's Godzilla! Dose he ever apper out of somewhere? Ok people I'm out of ideas and taking sugestins.

[Logmon1]

Sorry to DP but people plese don't wan't this to die!