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Crimson5M
June 10th, 2011, 04:41 AM
My stuff.

Maps
Oldest to newest:
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/245/a/e/obsidian_cave_by_altariaking-d2xv6s7.png (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/art/Obsidian-Cave-177814807?q=gallery%3Aaltariaking%2F30362405&qo=2)
An old cave map for an old hack that I'm now remaking. That means that at some time in the future, this map will be remade. It will be bigger, less linear and overall just a lot better.

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/352/6/f/nova_town_by_altariaking-d32hxl4.png (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/art/Nova-Town-185594440?q=gallery%3Aaltariaking%2F30362405&qo=3)
I've already re-done this. I'm not sure why I'm posting this actually.

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/356/1/3/route_401_redone_by_altariaking-d35g6wb.png (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/art/Route-401-Redone-190552043?q=gallery%3Aaltariaking%2F30362405&qo=4)
Ditto.

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/029/0/6/random_route_by_altariaking-d38bn62.png (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/art/Random-Route-195378698?q=gallery%3Aaltariaking%2F30362405&qo=5)
A random route to test some tiles. I only now realize how horrible this map is...meh.

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/047/9/e/lunar_forest_v_2_by_altariaking-d39omky.png (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/art/Lunar-Forest-V-2-197664082?q=gallery%3Aaltariaking%2F30362405&qo=7)
Other than the mountains, I actually like this. My first decent map tbh.

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/144/a/6/defying_limits_by_altariaking-d3h4fm6.png (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3h4fm6)
Made it to test Game Maker. Meh. Looks decent I guess.

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/178/6/2/my_best_map_ever__o_by_altariaking-d3k53p6.png (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/art/My-best-map-ever-O-215228922?q=gallery%3Aaltariaking%2F30362405&qo=0)
My best map ever. 'Nuff said.

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/196/2/3/route_gt8_by_altariaking-d3sgd1g.png (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/art/Route-GT8-229191172?q=gallery%3Aaltariaking%2F25667018&qo=5)
Made for the GT8 Map-off. Obviously crap because I got 7th place.

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/199/4/6/random_starter_town_by_altariaking-d408fb7.png (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/art/Random-Starter-Town-242257795?q=gallery%3Aaltariaking%2F25667018&qo=4)
Meh. I know about the error.

http://altariaking.deviantart.com/art/Littleroot-Town-174360547?q=gallery%3Aaltariaking%2F30362405&qo=1 (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/art/Littleroot-Town-174360547?q=gallery%3Aaltariaking%2F30362405&qo=1)
I guess this is all right...

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/221/f/6/route_101_by_altariaking-d461bex.png (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d461bex)
Too much flowers, take it back.

Sprites
Sprites from old to new:
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/231/9/9/trazio_region_dex_by_altariaking-d3fmtif.png (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3fmtif)
My fakedex. This will be updated when I feel like it. Please keep in mind that Hamahorn, Monana, Soupato, Fire Dragon and Rocrush were NOT sprited by me. And credit to Jesgrad07 for the dex base.

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/188/6/c/first_pmd_mugshot_by_altariaking-d3lbpsb.png (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/art/First-PMD-mugshot-217217099?q=gallery%3Aaltariaking%2F25667018&qo=1)
A PMD mugshot. Obviously crap because it got no comments or favs and only 12 views.

Tiles
Tiles from old to new:
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/189/5/5/public_tileset_by_altariaking-d3ldwe4.png (http://altariaking.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3ldwe4)
Only thing worth showing here.

That's all. Click images for credits.

Nintendork15
June 10th, 2011, 04:49 AM
These look good!
Was the spoiler thing really nessacary -_-''
and booshu reminds me of pikachu.

And i've seen hammerhorn in your hacks alot x3

tehGDS
June 10th, 2011, 04:54 AM
There are some Pokemon that needs some work, I don't really like Boovet and Rojay as much, it needs more design, as well as to smoothen it out, however there are some that I like, Cloakoon and Hamahorn are obviously well thought of, and the shading of them is also not bad! I liked those, Driblick looks like it has sludge on it's toungue, and Booshu looks like a Pikachu clone, Shellter also needs a different shell, it has a huge body with a small shell, Monana's Concept is good, however, there are some still spots, and needs to be smoothen out, all and all these concepts are GREAT ^ ^ however, there are some Pokemon that need some design changing

Dorandragon
June 10th, 2011, 09:05 AM
you have grass fighting and water rock, but you need to make fire flying now. it completes a full cycle of types. Fighting>Rock>Flying> Fighting/Grass>Water>Fire>Grass

Cyber Gorilla
June 10th, 2011, 01:46 PM
cant wait to see how shelltar turns out!, a lot of your fakes needs some AAing and shading touch ups, but so far the dex is looking awesome :D

Tetra
June 10th, 2011, 01:55 PM
It's looking really good, keep up the good work. :)

Crimson5M
June 19th, 2011, 07:43 AM
These look good!
Was the spoiler thing really nessacary -_-''
and booshu reminds me of pikachu.

And i've seen Hamahorn in your hacks alot x3

Thanks.
It's a Pikachu clone. :P
Hamahorn was in one hack you silly billy.

There are some Pokemon that needs some work, I don't really like Boovet and Robay as much, it needs more design, as well as to smoothen it out, however there are some that I like, Cloakoon and Hamahorn are obviously well thought of, and the shading of them is also not bad! I liked those, Driblick looks like it has sludge on it's toungue, and Booshu looks like a Pikachu clone, Shellter also needs a different shell, it has a huge body with a small shell, Monana's Concept is good, however, there are some still spots, and needs to be smoothen out, all and all these concepts are GREAT ^ ^ however, there are some Pokemon that need some design changing

You already told me this on msn :P
It's oil, it's based on a baby that licks oil from lamps. The idea is that the oil reacts with a chemical in its saliva, which helps it grow.
It's the actual snail part I'm concerned about...xD
Monana and Soupato were done ages ago, in a different style. They are being redone. :)

you have grass fighting and water rock, but you need to make fire flying now. it completes a full cycle of types. Fighting>Rock>Flying> Fighting/Grass>Water>Fire>Grass

I could do that, but the fire starter has to be a chinese zodiac animal. :P

cant wait to see how sShellter turns out!, a lot of your fakes needs some AAing and shading touch ups, but so far the dex is looking awesome :D

Thanks. :)

It's looking really good, keep up the good work. :)

Thanks. :)

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/170/8/7/pumpweeeeeeeeeee_by_altariaking-d3jbhwb.png (http://my.deviantart.com/messages/#/d3jbhwb)

Click it. :)

tehGDS
June 19th, 2011, 07:50 AM
It's a pumpkin, so it'll be a fire Grass if you evolve it, so it'll have Guts as an ability as well?

Logiedan
June 20th, 2011, 03:09 PM
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/170/8/7/pumpweeeeeeeeeee_by_altariaking-d3jbhwb.png (http://my.deviantart.com/messages/#/d3jbhwb)

Click it. :)

It's not bad but the two major problems is the dull expression of its eyes, after looking at its description of looking for Pokémon to play with, I think it should have a more playful or innocent expression. Here's my edit on the eyes and mouth.

http://i55.tinypic.com/egq1s9.png

The stub on the top should be spread out as well;it looks like the points pause around the back. The selective outlining is superb though, matches the B/W style quite easily.

Spritezorabw
July 6th, 2011, 05:40 PM
They're good, but I agree with Lieden

PokeDarby
July 8th, 2011, 02:45 AM
Looks good, cant wait to see it when more is done.

Somni
July 10th, 2011, 07:56 PM
really like your ghost one and your baby lickitung!

MonsterMMORPG
July 17th, 2011, 01:06 PM
well i think they are pretty good :)

legendarypokemon
August 2nd, 2011, 08:04 AM
Your fakemon are nice. I really like driblick

Crimson5M
September 5th, 2011, 12:10 AM
Time to bring this thread...
B|
Back from the dead.

YEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/243/d/f/deadly_flatulence_by_altariaking-d48f2dg.png

I'll be editing the first post with tons o' fun later today.
Oh and the Gastly isn't public but if you really want to use PM me.

Truality
September 5th, 2011, 11:37 AM
Now then, let's get to work:


SHELLTER

Mostly fine, but the shell needs some more detail. Like a few curves or something.

ERSECT

Very good, perhaps a little less rectified.

CLOAKOON

That's a very creative...cabbage. But as far as spriting goes it's all right.

BOOVET

It's well-sprited as it stands, but because it looks so...empty and featureless, there's a lot of room for improvement.

HAMAHORN

The main issue here is the eyes. You could make them more intense, more colorful or bigger, but as it is I get the impression that it's trying to do something nasty xD

SOUPATO

This doesn't look like a pokemon to me at all...anyway. The legs need some sorting (they're not exactly well-placed), and the soup...it makes it look too blobby. Maybe if it wasn't full, but had some space...

VAMBAT

There are some slight issues with the shading here...you could make it less blurry and interesting by playing around with the hues.

MONANA (no comment)

DRIBLICK

This looks like a chibi (small) version of Lickitung with dirt in its mouth lol. The sprite is fine, but it's just the concept that needs improvement.

BOLDENCE

Hoho, meet walky rocky pants It looks very 2-D to me. Add some shading and depth to it. And the eyes...why are they crossed?

BOOSHU

I...I can't bring out a comment for this. Pikachu got a tan?

ROBAY

Probably your best sprite, it looks SO WELL MADE. Apart from being a bit plain, it's really close to canon. Congratulations.


That's about it. The names you come up with are pretty funny, too.

I could make an evo for VAMBAT if you'd like me to, I have something cool in mind.

Crimson5M
September 7th, 2011, 01:08 AM
Now then, let's get to work:


SHELLTER

Mostly fine, but the shell needs some more detail. Like a few curves or something.

ERSECT

Very good, perhaps a little less rectified.

CLOAKOON

That's a very creative...cabbage. But as far as spriting goes it's all right.

BOOVET

It's well-sprited as it stands, but because it looks so...empty and featureless, there's a lot of room for improvement.

HAMAHORN

The main issue here is the eyes. You could make them more intense, more colorful or bigger, but as it is I get the impression that it's trying to do something nasty xD

SOUPATO

This doesn't look like a pokemon to me at all...anyway. The legs need some sorting (they're not exactly well-placed), and the soup...it makes it look too blobby. Maybe if it wasn't full, but had some space...

VAMBAT

There are some slight issues with the shading here...you could make it less blurry and interesting by playing around with the hues.

MONANA (no comment)

DRIBLICK

This looks like a chibi (small) version of Lickitung with dirt in its mouth lol. The sprite is fine, but it's just the concept that needs improvement.

BOLDENCE

Hoho, meet walky rocky pants It looks very 2-D to me. Add some shading and depth to it. And the eyes...why are they crossed?

BOOSHU

I...I can't bring out a comment for this. Pikachu got a tan?

ROBAY

Probably your best sprite, it looks SO WELL MADE. Apart from being a bit plain, it's really close to canon. Congratulations.


That's about it. The names you come up with are pretty funny, too.

I could make an evo for VAMBAT if you'd like me to, I have something cool in mind.




CRIT!
*Does happy dance*

I really don't like Shellter. It honestly just doesn't feel like a starter to me, so I'll be remaking it or scrapping it.

Rectified?

Lol it's a leaf pile :P

I redid it a while ago but I'm too lazy to add it to the OP, even with this edit.

All right, I'll try and fix the eyes.

Soupato is being completely redone. It was originally done for a hack so it was in 3rd gen style. Not only the sprite, but also the design will be redone.

I still don't know what hue means D:

No reply.

It's oil xD
It's based on a baby that licks oil from lamps. The idea is that the oil it licks contains a chemical which reacts with another chemical in its tongue and helps it to grow. Also...don't all babies look like smaller versions of their evos? xD

See first post :P

Booshu...I don't like Booshu.

Thanks :D
I edited it a bit, see first post.

It has an evo already, but if you can make a better one, go ahead :D


Massive update! See first post.

tnguye3
September 9th, 2011, 03:57 PM
Looking forward to seein the completed fakedex. ^^
Altho i might suggest that you resprite Embeno as imo the fire looks like it was done in 1 min and the overall design is plain.
I'm not sure what it is but considering its typing, I geuss its a berry with a beak on?

Leechle should also be worked on as it looks like a bent cone. Again the design is too simple so I suggest a redesign or something. :)

Bilaterus
September 14th, 2011, 12:18 PM
Wow I really like the cave map and your tile sets are really good! Have you taken them from black and white? Wherever there from even the ones from the other maps are really good too, obviously layout wise. Although I think for for caves and mountains if you didn't pillow so much (I know in one map you said they were a bit messed but I mean the cave one and some other ones) it might look a bit more realistic.

Great job though altogether :)

Crimson5M
October 16th, 2011, 05:12 AM
Looking forward to seein the completed fakedex. ^^
Altho i might suggest that you resprite Embeno as imo the fire looks like it was done in 1 min and the overall design is plain.
I'm not sure what it is but considering its typing, I geuss its a berry with a beak on?

Leechle should also be worked on as it looks like a bent cone. Again the design is too simple so I suggest a redesign or something. :)

It's a chilli xD
But yeah it's getting redone.

Leechle too.

Wow I really like the cave map and your tile sets are really good! Have you taken them from black and white? Wherever there from even the ones from the other maps are really good too, obviously layout wise. Although I think for for caves and mountains if you didn't pillow so much (I know in one map you said they were a bit messed but I mean the cave one and some other ones) it might look a bit more realistic.

Great job though altogether :)

Thanks.
Pillow out?


http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/Purrloin.png
Soft kitty warm kitty little ball of fur.
Sleepy kitty happy kitty purr purr purr.

eternityMMO
October 16th, 2011, 12:22 PM
Wow, those maps are awesome. It's full of details, I love how you placed the trees. Also the tileset looks very good. The colors are warm... Keep up with the good work! :)

Crimson5M
November 10th, 2011, 11:09 AM
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/314/e/d/mummy_i_want_a_balloon_by_altariaking-d4fq8p2.png

Give credit if used.
I sprite too many purple Pokemon.

zigzagame
November 17th, 2011, 05:48 PM
love the map!!! Good Stuff.

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
November 22nd, 2011, 07:11 AM
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/314/e/d/mummy_i_want_a_balloon_by_altariaking-d4fq8p2.png


The Drifloon looks so adorable. i really love how you did this one. the only probably with this is that if you look closely at Drifloon's cloud on it's head, it has a slight bit of purple on it. Anyways, great job and keep up the work.


:t354:TG

Crimson5M
November 24th, 2011, 04:00 PM
The Drifloon looks so adorable. i really love how you did this one. the only probably with this is that if you look closely at Drifloon's cloud on it's head, it has a slight bit of purple on it. Anyways, great job and keep up the work.


:t354:TG

Thanks. The purple is intentional :)


http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/328/2/8/a_scene_thing_by_altariaking-d4h6uqu.png
Trying to branch out more.

Logiedan
November 25th, 2011, 06:07 PM
The birds are too light to notice unless you get your face right up to the computer. Also the clouds and sun lack some anti-aliasing (or better anti-aliasing) because the bright teal outline is too harsh with the blue on the background.

Crimson5M
November 27th, 2011, 11:20 AM
Is this any better?
http://i760.photobucket.com/albums/xx242/altariaking/wutwip.png

unrivaledneo
November 29th, 2011, 06:57 PM
Stuff looks great, love the tiles keep up the work!