EX: MasterEmpire

[Ash_Pokemaster]

That's my first set! It have 87 Cards I don't currently know what other cards I'll add later!
01/87 Charizard |Rare| (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/Charizard1.jpg)
07/87 Oddish |Uncommon| (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/Oddish7.jpg)
11/87 Delibird |Uncommon| (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/Delibird11.jpg)
24/87 Scyther |Rare| (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/New%20Pokemon/Scyther24.jpg)
85/87 Deoxys ex |ex Rare| (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/New%20Pokemon/Deoxysexcopy.jpg)
87/87 Mew star |Rare| (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/Mewstar87.jpg)

MYSTIC
88/87 Rukario|Mystic Rare| (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/New%20Pokemon/Rukario88.jpg)

New Cards

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/New%20Pokemon/Deoxysexcopy.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/New%20Pokemon/Scyther24.jpg
And... first Rukario card ever!!! Yeah!!! Yo man!!!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/New%20Pokemon/Rukario88.jpg

[Firemaker]

9/10 I think that either the poke-body or weakness should be removed, if Oddish's poke-body says fire attacks do normal damage then the weakness has no reason to be in this card.

[Shadow]

OK first off, bad jpeg compression. Text and everything is blurry. Also, no 9-digit ID.

Wording:
Hide-And-Seek
If the Defending Pokémon is (fire) and attacks Oddish, your opponent must flip a coin. If tails, the attack does nothing.

(You don't need an "if heads it works normally" part)

Forest Hiding
Search your deck for a (grass) Pokémon and make it your Active Pokémon. Then shuffle Oddish into your deck.

(Need to know what to do with any cards attached to oddish though)

Seed Tackle
This attack does damage equal to 20+ the amount of damage done by the Defending Pokémon on your opponent's last turn.

^those are better, but may need be exactly correct.

[Zootster]

Besides wording like Shadow said there's one mistake i can pick out. "Seed Tackle" is too close to the energy cost. Move it over a circle if u no what i mean.

EDIT: Just noticed this. The "+" on "20+" is too big and shouldnt be centered verticly with the "20".

[Elite Four Lance]

It´s pretty good. But I agree with Zootster.

[Ash_Pokemaster]

Well, firstly for Firemaker's oppinion.
No I mustn't remove the Weakness, because there are some Pokemon that aren't influenced by Pokebody's or PokePowers^^
Shadow,
1. I explain that I need it
2. Ok I'll correct
3. I'll correct it but I won't write exactly that.

Zooster
I know, but that was the first time I used PhotoShop
I can't put energys on the circle, there's no space... I'll correct "+"

[ravenstorture]

The text for you Poke-Body is too close to the Poke-Body symbol and name. Also, two retreat cost for such a simple basic as Oddish seems like too much in my opinion. Oh well, it's your fake.

[Fangking Omega]

On it's good points, the card is impressive and it's a very nice concept. The art is really good! The errors I'm about to list aren't as severe as they will sound; this is better than some attempts.

Now the placement/font errors. Some of these have already been mentioned.
-Move the Pokémon name about 2 pixels left.
-The illus looks too bold.
-It's not hard to get the energies on the circles, it really isn't. I normally have about 3 pixels space between each energy.
-The left side of attack names should be around halfway through the 4th circle, and the bottom of attack names should line up with the bottom of the energy symbols.
-Your text boxes should have margins of 10 pixels at both sides, and the right side of the attack damage should line up with the right of the text box.
-The plus sign is too big (size 12 Humanist/Gill Sans condensed bold at 100 percent width is the norm) and should sit in the 10 pixel margin; it does not count as part of the attack damage.
-The Body effect is far too close to the Body symbol. Move it down.
-The attack and Body name fonts look to be the wrong size. Attacks are size 23 at 89 percent width, and Bodies are size 19.2 at 89 percent width.



Less important things
-No 9 digit ID?
-The Set number needs to be moved a tiny bit closer to the rarity.
-Move the set symbol to the right a bit.
-Ugly fire symbol? Where does it come from? Or is it jpg compression, which looks quite nasty.


Nonetheless, a good attempt. Keep it up! Here's a bit of useful advice if you like; if you want to be a bit more precise, you can try making the card while reading the sticky tutorial. This way, you'll pick up the techniques a bit easier. Take it slow and make a perfect job of it.

[Frostweaver]

in terms of balance, the fact that a basic Pokemon who can evolve got 60 hp (usually they got 50 hp) serves as a good reason why the retreat cost should be 2... makes sense to me to make up for the unusually high hp for a basic Pokemon.

[ravenstorture]

Well, I guess I understand that. I wondered about that HP being a bit high aswell.

[Aisu K.]

It's good, but since when did Oddish have arms?

[ravenstorture]

It's good, but since when did Oddish have arms?
Whoah! I never noticed that. XD

[Ash_Pokemaster]

LOL your right but I didn't made it. I found it on a Site! Anyway I correct Oddish! Not all problems, but wait this is my first card this is PERFECT for first isn't it?

[ravenstorture]

No, not really, considering my first fake was perfect. Took me quite a few hours to make and then more to go back and edit things I noticed. This had errors, so therefore it wasn't perfect.

[Ash_Pokemaster]

I put my edited oddish now.
Well PiroMunkie, this isn't only my first fake card this is my first picture in PhotoShop I used PhotoShop for first time when I made this card, realy!
Anyway, I'm searching for picture from Pokemon to make new cards right now!

[ravenstorture]

I would say go www.google.com (http://www.google.com) and try to find picture or try to find a websites that has good pictures. That is what I always do.

[Ash_Pokemaster]

Hey, I made a Mew *!
I think I improved much!

[ravenstorture]

Why did you switch it with Oddish. You probably should have kept Oddish and on your last post, the one that says you think you got better, have posted your mew fake in there. Now it looks like you posted a mew before and everyone was commenting on an Oddish which looks weird.

EDIT:

Nevermind, I see how you still gave the link to Oddish in your first post. That works out too. Don't mind my ranting above.

[Ash_Pokemaster]

I'm looking for a Lighting, Fire or Psychic Pokemon to make now! I'm between Charizard Ampharos and Mewtwo!
Anyway do you like my Mew*?

[MiNuN*]

Since everyone already included all specific errors.
Im just here to say hi.

And Pokemaster, Im not gay. O_O

[Ash_Pokemaster]

Since everyone already included all specific errors.
Im just here to say hi.

No nobody has grade Mew*, stop spamming...

And Pokemaster, Im not gay. O_O
So, what's that now?


Anyway I made a Charizard he is a Dark and a Fire Pokemon! I made him very strong because he is Charizard my favourite Pokemon! Anyway I'll made another card today, maybe later!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/Charizard1.jpg

Edit: Where could I find a Charmeleon small Picture for Stage 2?

[Fangking Omega]

Probably the biggest error I see is that you're effectively STEALING art here. I can now identify 2 of these pieces of art for definite; the Oddish is property of Jade and the Charizard is property of Kidduffet (also known as RDissonant) and Jade (that one was a collaboration). It's a safe bet that the Shining Mew art isn't your own either. This is plagiarism and it is severely frowned upon. Put the artist's name in the illus, not your own!

The attacks on that Charizard also curiously enough are exactly the same as Kidduffet's Dark Charizard card. Try originality here, and give credit where needed!

Your placement occasionally is a little off. For precision, go through the tutorial and correct where you're going wrong (attack damage is the most obvious misplacement).
Charizard is also lacking "Evolves from" text.

The evolution symbols are now to be found here;
http://www.pokemonpalace.com/index.php?id=tcg/fakes/accessories
They're very good because I made them. lolz. They're better than Zeo's which are blurry, and better than PA!'s horrible old ones (I loved everything about Pokémon Aaah before it died apart from the evocons X.x)
And I'm still waiting for PPNSteve to get the other blanks up ;)

[Ash_Pokemaster]

Well sorry, I found this card on my Laptop maybe I had save it long time ago, I didn't know that I must write the name of creator REALY REALY SORRY! I'll correct it :-)
If you know who is the creator of Mew tell me :-)
Anyway I think I found Charizard and Oddish at Charizard Valley (I don't remember URL) I'll continue putting other pictures, if I know the creator I'll always putting right the Illus. if I don't know I can't.
Again realy sorry

[Zootster]

Zooster
I know, but that was the first time I used PhotoShop
I can't put energys on the circle, there's no space... I'll correct "+"
I dont think u got what i was sayin'. The energies are fine, leave em where they are. It's the word placement that's screwed up. You have this:

(E)(E)(E)Seed Tackle

You should have this:

(E)(E)(E) ( ) Seed Tackle

Key:
(E) = energy
( ) = circle

Get what im saying?

Also, shouldnt the Charizard be called "Dark Charizard" cause its part dark??

[Ash_Pokemaster]

Well, I understood about Oddish! Know let's go to Charizard.
No at EX Cards (the new sets from EX Ruby/Sapphire I mean) Dark Pokemon shouldn't have Dark before their name because you can see that is a Dark Pokemon in the Sqare!
Anyway I'm wondering what card should I make now?
Maybe Scryther...

[ravenstorture]

The picture is blurry. It's pokepower is confusing. Does it stop all weakness and resistance for everyone, or just for charizard, or just for the defending pokemon? In it's first attack there is a typo with "shuffle" which on the card is suffle. On the second attack you must discard three fire energy, but the energy cost is two fire and two dark? what if the person using the charizard only has two fire and two dark on charizard and not three fire? What happens then?

[Ash_Pokemaster]

Well, when I say any Weaknesses and Resistances I mean any, In the "any" is opponent's Pokemon too, right? Well for "shuffle". I can't correct it because if I put the "h" then all the word will move under... Your right that's false I was thinking 2 (f) energys and I wrote 3... ^^
Anyway happy new year to all!

EDIT: Hey I edited all things (Shuffle too)(exept the"any" :P ) Thanks for observetions!

[Ash_Pokemaster]

Hey, I made a Delibird card (a very simple one)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/Delibird11.jpg
Do you like it?

[Ash_Pokemaster]

Hey, I have make 3 new cards since I put Delibird
Deoxys ex, Scyther and Rukario

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/New%20Pokemon/Deoxysexcopy.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/New%20Pokemon/Scyther24.jpg
And... first Rukario card ever!!! Yeah!!! Yo man!!!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/masterway/New%20Pokemon/Rukario88.jpg

[Archuleta Shuckle]

Wow, a Rukario card already? Cool. Nice cards man, but on Scyther, it is extremely important to KNOW the illustator instead of posting "illus. unknown" since you technically giving credit to no one. If you don't know the artist, don't use the art, but meh, you don't have to add the illus if you find it later, but it would be a good idea to do it next time.

The blanks and fonts and all the other stuff is not smooth. It's all jagged and stuff. Fix that if you can. Nice cards over all, but the placement for "Mysterious DarKness" should be on the 4th circle instead of the second. 1-3 energies always have the attack text on the 4th circle. You also have so minor placement flaws which need to be fixed. Refer to Fang's tutorial for that.

Deoxys: 7/10
Scyther: 8.5/10
Rukario: 8/10

[Ash_Pokemaster]

I edited Rukario, I'll check for Scyther!

[Blaziken DJ]

Hey,aint that Deoxys EX card real?

[Ash_Pokemaster]

No... This is the Deoxys in The Theme deck of Deoxys...
Anyway I'm working in a new Rukario card it'll be on soon!

[IceKitten]

Maybe you should change Rukario now we all know what it looks like ^_^

[PidgeotMaster]

Rukario's white outline is NOT NICE.

[IceKitten]

But I bet it's the closest thing he could get at that time XD