Murder at Thistwhistle

[Mr Cat Dog]

I won't ramble... but although this prologue doesn't feature any mention of Pokemon, they will be included in the main story. So... enjoy. ^_^

Murder at Thistwhistle

Prologue: Prophecies

Alone at night, a dying couplet say farewell.
Their partings are swift; like an angel
Of death. Betrayed, betrothed, between
Themselves are a matching sword and shield. Alone.
Together yet apart. But all is not lost.

They will be reunited, not in heaven, but
In the shadows of their past. Only there can they
Reap for what they have sewn. Unpicking
Every little stitch from the tatty hem of
Deceit, despair and the most important:
Death.

The Five betrayers shall be persecuted. For
When the past has been repossessed, Judgement
Shall reign. It shall sanctify the innocent, but
Condemn the guilty to a terrible fate.

The Power of Love. Sent from Above.
Death-defying this was not. But the
Consequences will wreak havoc upon those
Who have betrayed the Almighty pair.

Those who have not sinned will be spared.
But for those Five, a contrasting bridge of fate lies for
Them to walk across. Unbeknown to their fragile
Minds, their guardian angels have been stained
With their vulgar hands.

Alone at night, a dying couplet say goodbye.

[Lily]

*apologize for late review* ;-; My mouse got taken away, but Lily found it. =D

Now...I'm not the best at poetry >>; But I think it's good. Your word choices are...wow in this poem. I can't really say a lot, 'cuz I'm curious to see how this will relate to Pokemon...hm, probably a couple's dying..little..seperated love. *random guess*

But continue! I enjoyed reading it so far. =3

[Mr Cat Dog]

Thankies Lily. ^_^ Doing poetry for 2 months in English has taught me of some techniques and all that make it effective. And since diction is THE most important part of a poem, the word choices were quite important. XD I should have Chap 1 by next week some time.