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Solo_tremaine
January 1st, 2005, 09:49 AM
I am darkness,
I follow you areound wherever you go.
I touch you during your sleep.
I cause anything bad to happen to you.
Although there is a good side to me I cannot find.
theres one thing you should know,
just let me be alone

MegaDitto
January 1st, 2005, 10:01 AM
That is a okay poem.It's a little confusing to me.

Kelsey
January 7th, 2005, 12:42 PM
^^; Well, it surely does explain what darkness is, so that's good. The last two lines seem as though they are referring to a single person who feels as though darkness is who they truly are. Since darkness is often referred as evil, or bad; the 'darkened' person wishes to be left in peace, to go about their ways. I thought it was short, but meaningful. Good job. ^_^

~Kelsey