Universial tournament starring mario and luigi

[PokemonChampion2K4]

Hi!and welcome to my first comic and comic series.Here is the first comic for the serieshttp://img36.exs.cx/img36/4371/firstcomic5mr.gifEnjoy!I will be making more parts for this comic soon :D

[Goatman56]

I like it its ok I just want to see the fighting once I see that if its good i'll probably be hooked

[O]

I think the To Be Continued panel was completely un-necessary, try shrinking to to 75% so it's a bit smaller. It looks over pixelated at its size now.

[Shinin]

Make sure you give credit to the people who made/ripped sprites that you use in your comics (like to Tonberry2K for the Luigi in SMRPG style). And the comic is way too big.

[PokemonChampion2K4]

Ok I thank the spriters resouce for the sprites and any other site I got some off of.and does anyone want to be the owner of the toournament,champ of last year or announcer pm me :D

[~Dragonair~]

The comic wasn´t bad. The only thing is that it´s big. Anyways nice work.

[PokemonChampion2K4]

thx dragonair I still need a couple more characters

[Rated R Superstar™]

TOO BIG! also,make the text bubbles a little small,so they're close to the actual text,also,since it's a Universial Tournament,try adding a few sonic sprites,maybe Inuyasha,I dunno,PM me if you want some sprites...also,if it will be a good comic,DO NOT KEEP THAT 3-D BACKGROUND. :p

[PokemonChampion2K4]

I won't that is just from there and don't worry about sprites I got plenty it is going to have a lot of characters

[Shinin]

Oh, and don't make it SMRPG style. Use 2D style or Mario & Luigi style.

[PokemonChampion2K4]

fine I will say that they misteriously turned into 2d

[Goatman56]

ummm i'm waiting for the next one I really want to see

[PokemonChampion2K4]

It will come out soon all i need is an owner and anouncer for it anyone want to be one of them?

[Gohan]

I'll be the anouncer.I should have good practice......

[Triaspia]

please make your boxs smaller you used space for atleast 6 boxes and your bubbles are too large for what the character is saying plus if your going to include a to be continued box please make sure you have a even number of boxs so you can just pat a very small box across the botom (about 2cm) with to be continued in it

[PokemonChampion2K4]

ok I will take your advice for the next part which will begin after I get one more person to play a part.

[Logmon1]

Pokechamp did you see Logan's knew faceset?

[PokemonChampion2K4]

no I didn't logmon so I need it

[Logmon1]

It's on the DBZ thred. And read the text.

[PokemonChampion2K4]

once I getr one more character I can make the second third fourth and fifth comic

[Logmon1]

Did you ask starwars about it?

[PokemonChampion2K4]

no I'll go ask him if it is okay now

[Goatman56]

gah this is taking forever its been like 2 weeks since a new comic i'm getting just a little agitated but take your time if u really need it

[Mechajoseph]

I'll be thge owner,it's like people can't read :P They're all complaining: It's taking too long ETC. When you clearly said you need people to play parts :P

[Esupio]

ok thats sounds wha ti thoguht

[Logmon1]

Have you found another char yet? I want to see Logan in action!

[PokemonChampion2K4]

I am sorry people i am not cut out for this yet.once i am i will make more