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Princess of Oceans
January 3rd, 2005, 07:21 PM
Hatred

I hate you life...
Always in the shadows...
Piercing my heart like a knife...
Bringing me to new lows...

Whispers of hatred in my ears...
Making me wants to never listen...
Exposing my greatest fears...
Causing the darkness to glisten...

Anger growing into hate...
Unsure of where to turn...
Looking out for my fate...
Love is all I yearn...

Kelsey
January 5th, 2005, 10:29 AM
Aws, this was such a sad poem! ;-; I think you spelled wants instead of want, but that was the only real spelling error I saw. ^_______^ I think though your poem expresses darknes that one seems it may be hopeless to escape, your poem was good. Keep it up! ^_~

~Kelsey