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Miyu-chan
January 6th, 2005, 07:32 PM
Missing A Piece Of Christmas

Author: Miyu-chan
Disclaimers: Pokemon is the copyright of Nintendo, and other companies whom I do not remember. O.o; Its not mine, but this idea is mine, and this story is mine. =]
Authors Notes: This was originally written for the pokemon fan fiction contest, but sadly, I had to go on vacation (does that count as sad?) and my AC adaptor broke with my power on 13%. ;_;

This is a Ash + Misty = Pokeshipping (is that correct?) This is set in TV verse. =] Kind of cheesy, but hey, this is my first pokemon fan fiction xD; And if any of the characters names are wrong, just tell me. n_n;

Im sorry if there are any similar plots, but I swear that this is original. ><

---[STORY BEGINS]---

Pikachu, thundershock! Ash Ketchum voice was filled with enthusiasm as his Pikachu knocked down the target.

Great job! Ash shouted as he swung his beloved Pikachu around. Meanwhile, Misty Waterflower was watching from a corner, marving on how much he has improved on his skills as a Pokemon trainer.

If only he did that to me she thought as she watching Pikachu squeal happily. As the words passed through her brain, she quickly erased them.
Is it true? Is it true that I, the flower of Cerulean City, has developed feelings for this immature Pokemon trainer? she thought mockingly as she turned away from the happy scene.

Hey Misty! Ash yelled after her. Mistys heart seemed to pound faster as he heard his voice ringing through her ears. Always filled with enthusiasm did you see it?

Misty looked at him, embarrassed at being caught in the middle of her thoughts.
See what?

What Pikachu did! he said happily as he patted Pikachu on his head.

Misty was feeling jealousy pumping through her veins as she watched Pikachus content and happy face.
So, she begun, trying desperately shake away the feeling of jealousy. are you going back to Pallet Town to visit your mom for Christmas?

Instantly, Ashs face turned to stone. No. he answered abruptly and walked away, his tennis shoes squeaking on the floor, adding to the air filled with tension.

Misty stood there, confused and befuddled. What did I do wrong? she thought, going through what she had said to anger him. Her thoughts were disrupted as Brock appeared out of nowhere.

Hey, what happened here? he asked the girl in front of him.

Nothing she replied, with a confused look in her eyes.

Brock stared at Misty, knowing perfectly well what happened. Okay, but if you need someone to talk to, just talk to me. as soon as he finished, he started walking away.

Wait! Misty called after him. He turned back to look. So do you know why he stomped off like that? she asked meekly, fiddling with her fingers.

Brock nodded knowingly, Well, something happened to him during Christmas eve, when he was still little

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Daddy, why are you going out in the snow? little Ash asked his father worryingly.

To get your first pokeballs, so that you could be a great trainer - the best in the world someday. Mr. Ketchum said lovingly, bending down to ruffle his sons hair. then maybe I could have a go battling you. he chuckled.

As Mr. Ketchum opened the door, the wind blew in fiercely, bring drifts of snow inside the house.

Dear, would you please close that door? Its freezing outside! Delias voice drifted from the warm kitchen.

Dont tell Mom, okay? the elder whispered to his son, winking while putting on his winter coat.

Okay, Ash whispered back softly. but come back soon he finished. But by then, his father was long gone, lost inside the swirling snow.

Delia Ketchum walked by her son, asking worryingly, Have you seen your father? I dont know where he went

But Ash just sat in front of the door, as if awaiting someone to appear through the door. Delia noticed that heve been sitting there for hours already. Ash opened his mouth to mutter a barely inaudible No

His mother stopped in the middle of her ranting. Alright then she said, blinking.

A day passed. The snow storm went by. Christmas came, but two things were missing in the Ketchum household. His father, and the first poke balls in Ashs heart.

So ever since then, Ash blames himself for his fathers disappearance. His fathers disappearance was also one of the reasons why Ash vowed to be a Pokemon master Brock finished, and looked up to see Mistys reaction.

That that IDIOT. Misty muttered deadly under her breath. Brock looked at her, surprised. Quite frankly, her reaction wasnt the one he was expecting.

Its not his fault! I mean, personally I blame his father, but ITs NOT HIS FAULT! Misty growled under her breath as she stood up to leave with a unreadable expression.

Wait where are you going? Brock asked, with an worried tone in his voice.

To show him a piece of my mind, thats where. Misty said, her voice echoing from the long hallway.

Meanwhile, Ash Ketchum was heading out to buy some potions for the next gym leader battle. As he put on his winter coat, his thoughts started wandering to the Christmas some years ago

Ash Ketchum! rung a voice down the hall. Misty ran up to him, something clutched tightly in her hand.

What do you think you are doing, going out in the snow like that, what do you want to do, get yourself killed?! Misty scolded the dazed Ash. Anyways, come here. she continued, as she dragged Ash toward a doorway.

Errr why did you bring me here? Ash said confusingly as he looked around him.

To give you your Christmas present that you should have gotten. Misty said quietly as she placed the poke ball in Ashs palm.

Ash looked at her, his face full of emotion, I he started to say., but Misty caught him off. Open it. she urged him.

Ash opened it slowly, inside the poke ball, was a tiny spring of mistletoe, reflected brightly by the tiny mirrors inside. He looked upwards, to find Pikachu holding a much bigger spring over their heads.

I added something of my own. Misty said shyly, as she kissed Ash lightly on the cheek.

Merry Christmas Ash.

Merry Christmas Misty. Ash replied, smiling. The missing piece of his heart was found, as well as something else. Something else to look forward to.

NaVeR
January 6th, 2005, 08:48 PM
Hey, that was pretty good!

I really liked the nice, cozy ending, and your take on what happened to Ash's father. Sorta dark for a Pokemon story o.O;;

I also really liked that you used the Kanto/Johto trio instead of using Max and May (no offense to fans). I feel like they had a tighter connection than the Hoenn gang.

Misty envying Pikachu was funneeee XD

There were a couple of capitalization errors, but nothing big enough to really matter much, I actually over looked them at first.

Overall, good fic!^^

Miyu-chan
January 7th, 2005, 07:01 PM
Thanks~ <3, you just said what I really was trying to do in this story. =3 Thanks~ And I so agree with the part on the Hoenn gang. I'm sorta old. xD;

LanceLite
January 8th, 2005, 03:12 AM
hehe... the part where misty is jealous of may is funny. but that part of how ash's dad disappears is kinda .... filling my head in curiousity for some reason. the ending was great. its been a while since i read a good AAML fic ending.

good job miyu!

Miyu-chan
January 8th, 2005, 04:41 PM
May? xD; There's no May in my ficcy. =3

Thanks for the nice compliements~ =3 What's an AAML? xD *is clueless*

NaVeR
January 9th, 2005, 01:16 AM
Thanks for the nice compliements~ =3 What's an AAML? xD *is clueless*

AAML = Ash and Misty Love (?...)

I've been wondering that m'self...

LanceLite
January 12th, 2005, 08:03 AM
yipe biggest .. er... weirdest typo i ever made.. insert pika in place of may.. was thinking about her for my fic at that time....

AAML is Ash And Misty Love. AAMR is same... where R is Romance. aka SaKaShipping and PokeShipping.. there were more but i forgot.

Gohan
January 12th, 2005, 05:35 PM
That was so funny.you should continue,its really good.

LanceLite
January 13th, 2005, 07:07 AM
why not? why dont u rite a sequel to this?

Miyu-chan
January 13th, 2005, 04:34 PM
Continue it? o.o; Well... I wrote this intending it to be a oneshot... I don't know if I can continue it... I'll try though. n_n;

LanceLite
January 14th, 2005, 01:28 AM
heh.. i wrote Winters of Sadness as a oneshot then decided to write prequels... but then decided to not post them cos they got too scary.

just make another chapter like..... something that happens between ash and misty.... and something... *imagines* now u dont want to know how i'd like to continue this story ^_^;;

Miss Reyna
January 15th, 2005, 09:30 PM
Nice christmas one!!

i never seen an fan fic where Misty envy Pikachu. Now that was a good one!

Then a nice ending in the end. A kiss. (tear drop)

Encore! Encore!